What is that nois Fred?

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i wrote this in th 8th grade 4 a project

Submitted: January 11, 2012

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Submitted: January 11, 2012



“What is that noise, Fred?” June asked. Fred didn’t answer because he was asleep in his lazy boy recliner.  When June noticed Fred was asleep, she decided to investigate herself.



As June was investigating the walls for holes, a mouse landed on her. The mouse landed on her shoulder.

“Get it off of me! Get it off!”  June yelled.


“ What’s wrong!”, Fred yelled As Fred ran in to the kitchen he saw something small run past him. He didn’t think much of it because he was worried about his wife.


When Fred got into the kitchen, June was on the table freaking out, and she was screaming something. All of the chairs were broken, and the garbage can was upside down.

“What happened in here?” Fred yelled.

“Call the exterminator!” ”We have a mouse problem!” June yelled.


The next day an exterminator knocked on their door. His name was Danny Hawthorne. When June opened the door she said,

“Thank goodness you’re here. I couldn’t sleep at all last night.”

Danny responded,” You’ll be able to sleep when I’m done.”


“Who are you?”  Fred said fearfully as Danny walked in to the family room.

“I’m your ticket to a mouse free environment,” Danny said with a smile on his face.

“Fred!” June interrupted.

“Can you please leave Danny alone so he can kill that fat black mouse?” June said.

“Okay” Fred said.


“So where did you last see the mouse, Ms. Cloud?” Danny asked.

“I believe I last saw that pest in the kitchen,” June answered.


“If you don’t mind, I’ll have to go to the kitchen and have a look around,” Danny scarpered.

“ Go ahead,” June said excitedly.


When Danny walked into the kitchen, he could see the problem right away. He saw two holes in the wall by the oven.

He said, “ I have just the thing.” After he said that he went out to his van and took something out. That thing looked like some huge hammer.


When Danny and June got the mousetrap into the house, Fred was still sleeping in his lazy boy recliner. Danny then put the trap by the mouse hole.


Danny waited for a whole 30 minutes. After 30 minutes the mouse was finally caught. Danny toke the trap out into the woods and realeasted the mouse.



The Cloud family now lives in a mouse free life. They were pleased by the work of Danny and his machines.  

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