possesed by devotion.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

this was a poem I had written portraying as a teenage boy, when I was younger I believed if one was a way the others were to. so I began to write this as a person I once knew. but emphasised what he was like to make him the worst.

convince her to my corrupt  affections with a consistent lurk, I'll appear re-born however it's hell on earth,behave like i recognize allow her a smile, deviously cleave away her heart;following she do what i say.she will never know not until i have no gain, whatever she tells  i withdraw my place.although i be seen as characteristic and amiable,to her when i abandon she she'll sight what i desired. i fancied a amusement,anyone would do,I'm an incredible actor you a gullible shrew, turn your back on me now it's hijacked let it be your fault,I'll tell our friends you've always been a slut and they'll accept me by default,you had lots of friends that will never be yours again,but hey hoe idlest you'll be vulnerable for my friends.time withdraws away if you some how recover I'm here again-for you,I'll be your lover.

Submitted: May 12, 2013

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Excellent work! I loved this:)

Tue, May 14th, 2013 1:16am


excellent wow, he's sounds horrible... a very emotional piece, i loved it!

Thu, May 16th, 2013 3:32pm


Like the use of vocabulary here: it adds to the poem. Flows well, stands out and the rhyming is good. I like it, good job :)

Thu, May 16th, 2013 6:11pm


Really good poem, I like how u got in character. It would have been better if it wasn't uploaded from mobile lol the stanzas would have been more clear, but its still amazing

Fri, May 24th, 2013 8:05pm

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