Exotic Dreams

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is something I came up with while daydreaming on a rainy day...

The stars, the moon, the darkness deep

My “Otherworld” where I go to sleep.

An icy forest, a castle of glass,

a burning candle, snow covered grass.

The rain on my widow like tears on a face

Inside my head in my own quite place.

A never-ending waterfall falling through space

a shimmering pool, and book edged with lace.

Dark clouds in the sky and tall gnarled tree

A night on the beach and A storm in the sea.

A dark dreamy field, and the cool white mist,

and strange lovely creatures that just don't exist!

 


Submitted: June 05, 2014

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peacemaker06

Superb!! you have an amazing imagination and flare for creating profound imagery. Once again the poem rhymed and flowed well and once again you had me under your spell ;)

Thu, June 5th, 2014 4:01am

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Thanks

Thu, June 5th, 2014 6:45am

peacemaker06

loved the end btw! "strange lovely creatures that just don't exist" your really know how to punctuate your endings! just wonderful and i can't wait for more. You really now how to draw your readers in to your magical and sometimes dark world...I hope you have a story up your sleeve too?

Thu, June 5th, 2014 4:04am

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Thanks! :D I do have a story or two... ;)

Thu, June 5th, 2014 6:42am

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