My Heart Departed

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I found out that the one I thought I would keep in my heart forever is in someone else's heart as well

I feel empty inside
My deepest core feeling
Scraped completely clean
My heart has been ripped to shreds
My dignity lay in ruins
But now u are dressed in ribbons
You don’t care
I don’t exist
In your place of love
Never again will my heart be whole
Until you are the one who fills it
I happen upon your myspace one day
And decide to see how your doing
I found that you are engaged to Meghan
How could I have been so foolish
I’ve thrown away so many relations
Just so you’d still have a place in my heart
And now you have manipulated my charity so
That I never now will feel completed

Submitted: June 13, 2009

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Wow. This is so deep.

*hugs* This is excellent.

=D =P

Tue, June 16th, 2009 7:15am


Wow. This was so sad. Is it true? If it is, *hugs*. A great piece! ^^

Thu, July 9th, 2009 5:34am


sadly.... yes, this is true. The good news: I found out that I am more creative in my writing when I'm emotional.... ^^; -looks around awkwardly-

Thu, July 9th, 2009 8:32pm


WOW!!So sentimental...oh! touching!!And ur right ..i too feel the is very creative when you are emotional. :-)

Sat, July 24th, 2010 1:16am


This is really emotional good job I will continue reading your work :)



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