Of Smoke, Of Fire

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Poem about smoking. Very different from any of my other works. Take a look, and tell me what you think.

The click of a lighter
The crackling ignition
Of smoke, of fire
The orgasmic inhalation
The tantalizing desire
Of smoke, of fire
The unbelievable taste
The taste that takes you higher
Of smoke, of fire
The gasping inhale
The sultry smell
Of smoke, of fire
The sweet satisfaction
The longing lust
Of smoke, of fire
The smoky smolder
The hypnotic haze
Of smoke, of fire
The smoke, the fire
At last,
The consumed desire
Of smoke, of fire

Submitted: May 16, 2010

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I really enjoyed this. It had an obious messege but was put across in a very graceful way. Props.

Sun, May 16th, 2010 8:01pm


thanks! appreciate it

Sun, May 16th, 2010 1:14pm


I really liked this. the last to lines were my favorite.

Mon, May 17th, 2010 12:36pm


thank you very much!

Mon, May 17th, 2010 6:07am

Christian Taylor

Very good poetry! Nicely done!

Tue, July 6th, 2010 2:25pm


Thanks! :D

Tue, July 6th, 2010 8:52am

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