Hope Moves Us On

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Based on Emily Dickinson's poem "Hope" is The Thing with Feathers

Hope moves us on,
Through the good times and bad.
Hope moves us on,
When we're happy or sad.
 
Hope keeps us warm,
When we're frightened and cold.
Hope keeps us warm,
When we're saddened and old.
 
Hope in Christ Jesus,
Helps us stay strong.
Hope in Christ Jesus,
Keeps us in song.
 
Hope moves us on,
Through the good times and bad.
Hope moves us on,
When we're happy or sad.
 
 


Submitted: February 06, 2013

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thomaskutz

I love this! The repetition adds a lot to it. I admire your faith also! I've published a lot about faith, check some of them out!

Wed, February 6th, 2013 11:11pm

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Thank you, I will. :)

Fri, February 8th, 2013 2:32pm

Naan

losing hope is exactly like losing faith, and I know I've been there a thousand times, but you are absolutely right, it moves us on if we hold on strong
thank you for this beautiful up-lifting poem
beautifully-written

Thu, February 7th, 2013 8:51am

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You're totally welcome!!! :D

Fri, February 8th, 2013 2:30pm

synesthesia

I am not a Christian, but, I really respect the Christian faith, its so pure. I loved this poem. expressing our belief's makes us who we are : ) I'll keep reading!

Mon, March 18th, 2013 6:51pm

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Thank you so much!!! And I encourage you to check out Christianity. It has changed my life in so many ways!!! And its all for good! God bless!!!! ?

Fri, March 22nd, 2013 12:03pm

Lisa Ayers

Love it!! Especially your reference to Jesus. You got it going on!

We have similar taste in writing.

Nice to meet you Writer Girl. You are talented.

Thu, August 29th, 2013 7:05am

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Thanks!!! And its nice to meet you, too!!! XD

Sat, August 31st, 2013 12:34pm

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