allens misery

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
this is a short story that i will continue on

Submitted: November 02, 2014

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Submitted: November 02, 2014

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Chapter 1
‘I cant believe spring vacation started’ said allen ‘I know al ive been waiting for this for such a long time’ said sam ‘I think im gonna finally tell diane about my feeling’ said al blushing *sam laughs* ‘after 3 years man its about time’ says sam ‘ill tell her tonight at the end of the outing’ said al.
sam wishes him luck and starts heading home. Al heads to the grocery store to pick up some food to cook for himself and his sister. Since his mom said that she will be busy working today. ‘hi yuno’ said al when he got inside ‘im making pork chops for lunch,ok?’ asked al ‘sure’said yuno as al started cooking he heard the news which was talking about a small gang killing and raping women. 
After he finished cooking his mom came home ‘im starving whats for lunch’ asked al’s mom ‘pork chops’ said al. after his mom changed and came down to eat al warned his sister and mother about the gang.
Al finished eating and went to shower. He changed into a pair of jeans and a tank top and snickers. He took a small knife just incase something happened. He met sam and diane at the mall. ‘what do you guys wanna do first?’ asked sam ‘wanna go bowling?’ said diane ‘sure why not we have the whole day’ said al enthusiastically. They went and started playing al kept feeling like he was being watched but everytime he checked no one was looking he just shrugged it off. After bowling they went to watch a movie. ‘that was boring I wish I didn’t come with you guys’ said diane as a joke ‘one can only dream’ said sam the three started laughing. They were heading home and al was ready to confess but they were stopped by around 7 men 3 had a knife 1 had a bat and 2 had metal poles. Sam whispered ‘on my mark run’ since sam was the schools top soccer player and was muscular al and diane noded in response. They were taken to a ally by the men and were ounched a few times. They took diane and started licking her and touching her. Sam and al were enraged and punched on of the men but were quickly stopped and beaten but sam took one of the metal poles and started to hit them ‘GO CALL THE POLICE’ said sam. Al started running to the neariest police station since his phone had no battery he told the police and showed them the place but thare was no one there not even a drop of blood scared and enraged al started running off to look for his friends while the police thought he was crazy. He found diane on the floor unable to move and bleeding ‘diane’ shouted al from a distance ‘al?’ said diane with hope ‘al they took sam’ said diane barley able to talk covered in blood ‘its ok we will find him don’t worry diane we need to get you to a hospital said al as he was trying to carry her but found out she was pinned to the floor with a few nails and could only be removed with care. ‘im gonna go call the ambulance and come back’ said al ‘dont go please don’t leave me alone’ said diane crying ‘ok diane’ said al trying not to cry ‘im sorry diane’ said al ‘its ok al you couldn’t have don’t anything’ says diane. Al hugs diane and kisses her forehead ‘diane I love you’ says al ‘about time’ says diane coughing. ‘I love you too al’ smiling. Al kisses diane when he leans away diane says ‘al don’t blame yourself for what happened to me and sam we will always love you no matter what’ says diane with her final breath. Al screams in rage then cries in frustration. He collapses on the floor and wakes up in a hospital.

After a few seconds al remembers what happens then sobs.

‘NOO!!’ screams al in frustration ‘WHY!!’ says al as he gets up but is stopped by the doctors. ‘GET AWAY!’ shout al as he pushes one of the doctors ‘LET ME LEAVE’ the doctors agree to let him leave but he doesn’t go home. He goes to train his body and mind to avenge his friends and save sam if he is alive. He goes to a shop and buys a bokken (wooden sword) and trains. He trains for a few hours until he is drenched in sweat and can barley move. He goes back home but doesn’t say anything to his sister and mother. ‘brother’ shouts yuno when he gets in and goes to hug him. He doesn’t hug her back he just continuous walking. He goes to his room and sleeps. He wakes up in the morning at 3am and continues training. He trains until 12pm. He faints from exhaustion. And wakes up to someone saying ‘ you should eat more kid’. Al looks up to see a middle aged man smiling al gets up but falls instantly. ‘easy kid’ says the man. Al doesn’t listen and gets up and walks away the man holds his hand. Al punches him the man dodges him and throws him on the bed. Enraged al throws a couple more punches until he cant even move. ‘you will die if you continue this way’ says the man ‘WHAT DO YOU KNOW OLD MAN!!!’ screams al ‘all im saying is the truth’ says the old man ‘ive seen you training let me tell you you have some pretty shitty technique let me train you’ says the old man ‘will you be able to help me?’ says al ‘yes’ saysthe old man ‘fine’ says al ‘first let me introduce my self im goken’ says the old man (goken) ‘first you need to relax your body for a few more hours and eat something’ says goken. Al obeys goken and does as he says. After a few hours of rest they started training. ‘Before we practice on technique we need to build up your muscles how about 200 pushups for a warm up?’ says goken ‘fine’ replies al. After the pushups al meditates with goken then continues with training. ‘now I need you to go run from the supermarket and back’ says goken ‘but that isn’t far from here it wont help my training that much’ says al ‘I need groceries :D’ says goken with a smile ‘ok but youre paying’ says al. ‘ofcourse’ says goken.after al picks up the groceries they continue with their training. 


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