The Elevator

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
The elevator where only some of the strongest off all will return but how do they get there death well read to find out!
Im 13 yrs old and want to experience Authoring, please tell me improvements to help.

Submitted: November 25, 2013

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THE ELEVATOR

Once in the cold dark beloved streets of  London, was an elevator that was to be said the elevator of evil where only the strongest of all would survive a ride in this elevator with the flickering lights; you could just disappear any moment when the lights blow and the elevator turns black with sounds surrounding you not knowing how long you're in this terrifying shaky cold ride or will the doors stay shut? You could only know the answers from a ride but would they be forgotten after your death lies below the ride of this elevator!

One day there where three school kids, all boys and all aged thirteen but these students where new and with a life of hell it was just about to get worst, the three school kids lived in flats where this lift would lead them to a shortcut or at least that’s what their new school friend told them; with no fear of terror on their minds they carried on muttering and then they pressed the button not noticing the numbers skipped a few, the doors slowly opened and eventually they entered casually; dropping their bags in the corner as the doors shut faster than electricity they then felt pressure with terror and only one noticing the graffiti saying "say your last words whilst you're able" he thought to himself " teenagers hey" there ride didn't only go down instead of up but the lights shacked and shattered one of them called " everyone here?" with only two voices to be heard they were moving around in the pitch of black not knowing where there moving to they heard the doors squeak open but only they didn’t know that they were the doors and the last thing to be heard was "agrrhhhhhhh"

"Who's there" said the last kid alive or at least known to be alive, the doors this time opened to light he turned around to look at the light but the light was full of red, red blood dripping saying "here’s your friends" the last student alive ran until he faced a dead end of a big brick wall; she screamed and scratched the walls to attempt to leave this unknown place and then these small demented monstrous characters jumped out of now where and they were  like a small crawling zombie monster; but they looked like my friends in an evil way so still screaming and crying of fear he ran back into the lift, trying to get the doors to close immediate but with no speed, she didn't make it into the lift he fell through where there was no floor to stand anymore, the lift suddenly retrieved its floor back and slowly coming down the lift was going to squash his but he tried to get through the gaps of the elevators frame work but with no luck he was gone all her body parts had been broken and were now separate and all to be seen was a hand and more squashed and filled with red parts and from this day no one would know where there death would lie!

Thanks for reading!


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