Strong Apocalypse

Depressingly relateable. I love the unmitigated feel of it. Another great piece.

MMMM..thats one strong title and the idea behind the writing is strong.A couple of words missed out ie to..
but the message is clear..proof read when ya done Bro..the nice finish is always presentation..nice piece of work..I like the depth of your thinking and expression.

it was really good :D

good job. I agree with runereader. You should proofread it again and fix word technicalities, but other than that, very deep and very well done.

very good
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I agree with catherine and runereader.
just a few words that weren't there.
but who knows maybe you wanted it like that
But still very good!!!

very depressing and powerful at the same time!
i wouldn't change a thing!

I liked it! Very good. Dont change anything

Hmm? Well, I see an insightful man trying to soothe an angry woman. I've got to say that if you can soothe the beast you've got it made. :) Another nice job. ( 'a' cliffhanger )

hi! james. well, it takes two to tango. at the moment, seems like u've to give in a lot to save a messy situation but i'm sure ur efforts'll be worth it. for they'll save the relationship. an understanding mate is always welcome. loved it. ;-)

Strong words and I somehow see some hidden pain. Very well written.

Very true. Very very true. Two thumbs up!
Justine

sad, a little depressing, but you really captured the emotion. good job.

Very true and a little sad, but you did a great job with this one, James. :)

this is a great poem it really touched me =)

One of the storms in a relationship. You did a good job on the poem.

Loved it! THere were a few spots here and there were the rhythm (I can't spell right not, so if that's wrong, sorry)was kind of off, but you got it right back.

The meaning was great, and I loved the way you wrote it. I could almost see the fight happening. =)

Great job!

hmmm....makes me think
in the 4th stanza i didn't understand this line:
"baby dont bring this home;"
it doesn't fit the poem...and it sort of doesn't make sense....if i'm just not getting it, please tell me what it means in a comment on my page...
i like how you showed the woman's anger and the man's frustration
it was a well done poem ^^-
and now i'm off to see the rest!
*quickly runs to next poem*
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some grammer can be worked on but i like it ur poems are cool. =]

wow. Pretty good

this is good :]

i like how you rhymed words that i'd never think of rhyming

and i love the mood it presents

nice job :]