Save Me From This Paralysis

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

your tranquil voice protects me.

I cannot move, for I am undone

and now the numbing sensation

reveals to me that I am weak

but you appear to me and speak

tranquility I hear in your voice

I am offered to make the choice

to walk again, or fall face down

to swim with you, or else drown

in this ocean above me all over

I see the sky and know the earth

is beneath me, as I stand still

so I take your hand and you will

lead me into the broad, open field

protecting me behind your shield

from the monsters lurking ahead

until we both no longer feel dread

and the sun shines without burning

and I am able to feel again, yearning

for you to never, ever let go of me

just hold on, and we'll soon be free

Submitted: May 28, 2009

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Mademoiselle Jolie

Ur a really good writer (:

Wed, July 8th, 2009 4:47pm


thank u so much for the inspiration to continue ;D

Wed, November 25th, 2009 12:59pm


wow. very inspirational Im sure he loved it,Keep it up and good luck xoxo:)

Wed, July 15th, 2009 10:05pm


oh absolutely..being that he's a gamer and all(oops!) haha :)....thank u for ur comment, we're great :D

Wed, November 25th, 2009 12:58pm

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