this is a diffrenet version of one of my poems

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
well its a poem but i edited the ending

Submitted: May 09, 2008

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you thought i was so happy
well in fact
what if i told you
it was all an act

my fire inside
that once burnt so bright
now is dark!
as dark as night

my life is a waste
wishing i was dead every day
using this knife
to end my life


now i wait .....
...waiting for my death



i doesn't matter because ..
.. i was allready dead inside

what do you think ?


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