well this is one of my poems edited

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
it about day to day life just wearing a mask

Submitted: May 07, 2008

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you thought i was so happy
well in fact
what if i told you
it was all an act

my fire inside me
that once burnt so bright
is now dark!
as dark as night

this face you see
on me
trying to cover up,
this shitty life i lead!

to die;
is to be free
to live;
is to die inside...

im not sure on the ending.
all comments are welcome to improve my poem


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