A crushed Soul

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

Ok... This wasn't written by me!!! It was written by one of my friends Heidi!!

We get quite bored in study hall hehehe

My soul was crushed,

Just like the charcoal toast I made this morning.

A pile of pitch black dust is all that's left.

 

My sould was crushed,

Just like the rib-cage of the carcase on the side of the road.

Smashed and ground into the asphalt.

 

My soul was crushed,

Just like the windshield of a car that experienced a head-on collision.

Shattered into a million itty-bitty pieces.

 

My soul was crushed,

Just like the bones in the guys nose i broke yesterday.

Broken and crooked as hell.

 

my soul was CRUSHED!!


Submitted: January 18, 2008

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Twilightangel

I like your poem!! leave me an comment some time.

Fri, January 18th, 2008 10:54pm

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Thanks. My friend Heidi actually wrote that in study hall. I'll be sure to tell her that less than five minutes after i put it up someone commented!!!
I'll be sure to comment you!!!!!

THANKS FOR READING!!

Fri, January 18th, 2008 2:59pm

Angelsong

this shows exactly what it's like to be...crushed :) just a few minor spelling errors is all. ("soul" and "carcass" in second paragraph)
nice work ^_^

Mon, January 19th, 2009 10:20pm

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lol. Wow, nobody has read this. lol. My friend wrote this, and I found it funny lol thankya!

Mon, January 19th, 2009 2:34pm

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