.Make.Sure.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Hope you like it. wrote it earlier.

Worthless
Useless
Hopeless
Death to the agony

Shakeing
Convulsing
Shivering
Bow down to the apathy

Control it
Maintain it
Compose it
Give into the feeling

Cut it
Swallow it
Shoot it
Make sure you stop breathing


Submitted: April 02, 2009

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XxBlueTrumpeterxX

Whoa, creepy. Insanely awesome imagery. A great poem.

?Erin?

Thu, April 2nd, 2009 2:37am

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yea, thanks.

Thu, April 2nd, 2009 12:23pm

JenDamsel

Mmm i'm loving your style! this is another hit, really good. the last stanza is definitely my favorite.

Sun, May 31st, 2009 2:26am

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Again, thanks.

Sat, May 30th, 2009 7:30pm

hhhh

Short, yet pack a powerful punch! Yeah I agree with Jenn the last one was amazing! It was so short, yet I was like totally compelled by it. Nice!

Sun, May 31st, 2009 2:45am

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thanks

Sat, May 30th, 2009 7:45pm

Sunshine Raines

wow such a strong piece with vary few word I like I like. S.R.

Sun, May 31st, 2009 2:45am

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thanks

Sat, May 30th, 2009 7:46pm

Caycee

So strong in such few words. :]
Greatt workk. :]

Sun, May 31st, 2009 3:01am

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thanks

Sat, May 30th, 2009 8:20pm

Rach Loves Sam

I like this one. Interesting :]

Tue, June 2nd, 2009 11:27am

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okay. thanks.

Tue, June 2nd, 2009 12:50pm

kaylaaa1994

oh, wow. It's brilliant. Very deep. I wish I could write like that! Great job.

Thu, July 16th, 2009 7:06pm

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most of my poems are like this. and im sure if you sat down and really tried you could write a good poem. and thanks :] means alot.

Thu, July 16th, 2009 12:07pm

aria aiedail

The last line gets me. I've known to many people who try to take their life. Cut it. Swallow it. Shoot it...

Thu, July 16th, 2009 11:06pm

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yea. im sorry that it reminds you of that. but thanks.

Thu, July 16th, 2009 4:06pm

readerwriter10159

such a strong poem and words. THe last part is my favorite. this is really good!

Thu, August 20th, 2009 8:35pm

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thanks

Thu, August 20th, 2009 1:48pm

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