Worthless
Useless
Hopeless
Death to the agony
Shakeing
Convulsing
Shivering
Bow down to the apathy
Control it
Maintain it
Compose it
Give into the feeling
Cut it
Swallow it
Shoot it
Make sure you stop breathing
Submitted: April 02, 2009
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Mmm i'm loving your style! this is another hit, really good. the last stanza is definitely my favorite.
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Again, thanks.
Sat, May 30th, 2009 7:30pm
Short, yet pack a powerful punch! Yeah I agree with Jenn the last one was amazing! It was so short, yet I was like totally compelled by it. Nice!
Sun, May 31st, 2009 2:45am
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thanks
Sat, May 30th, 2009 7:45pm
wow such a strong piece with vary few word I like I like. S.R.
Sun, May 31st, 2009 2:45am
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thanks
Sat, May 30th, 2009 7:46pm
So strong in such few words. :]
Greatt workk. :]
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thanks
Sat, May 30th, 2009 8:20pm
I like this one. Interesting :]
Tue, June 2nd, 2009 11:27am
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okay. thanks.
Tue, June 2nd, 2009 12:50pm
oh, wow. It's brilliant. Very deep. I wish I could write like that! Great job.
Thu, July 16th, 2009 7:06pm
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most of my poems are like this. and im sure if you sat down and really tried you could write a good poem. and thanks :] means alot.
Thu, July 16th, 2009 12:07pm
The last line gets me. I've known to many people who try to take their life. Cut it. Swallow it. Shoot it...
Thu, July 16th, 2009 11:06pm
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yea. im sorry that it reminds you of that. but thanks.
Thu, July 16th, 2009 4:06pm
such a strong poem and words. THe last part is my favorite. this is really good!
Thu, August 20th, 2009 8:35pm
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thanks
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Whoa, creepy. Insanely awesome imagery. A great poem.
Thu, April 2nd, 2009 2:37am?Erin?
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yea, thanks.
Thu, April 2nd, 2009 12:23pm