Pray to satan

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Hope you like it... it's all true...

All I see is the blood
And the scars from all the cuts
All I want is to ly down
And just give it up
All I feel are the tears
That fall just like I feared
All I need is the blade
And my vision would be cleared
All I want is the pain
And to walk out in the rain
That my tears have created
Just like the blood from my veins
All I say are mumbled words
Cuz if I move it fucking hurts
So I whisper all my sorries
And pray to satan that I burn


Submitted: February 18, 2009

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ConcreteAngel

Ummm...whats the word I'm searching for...WOW! Yeah that's it. Depressing but amazing. So real and so sad. It was an excellent write although not about a happy subject. I can't pick a favorite line because so many stand out for me. I must say though that I'm sorry you feel that way and I hope it gets better for you.

Wed, February 18th, 2009 9:39pm

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Yea, I do too.

Wed, February 18th, 2009 1:40pm

DomXD

*twitches* wow hmmm...ummm...well i agree with concrete angel tat is well - Depressing - but really good. I do hope that everything works out for you, it makes me incredibly sad that you feel this way and you really shouldn't have to....
but like i said i hope everything gets better

xxx
DOM

Wed, February 18th, 2009 10:03pm

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Yea, well thanks. it means alot. I hope it gets better too. Ily him.. and I hate it when I hurt him.

Wed, February 18th, 2009 2:04pm

bludsucker

whoa

Thu, February 19th, 2009 3:48am

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lol

Thu, February 19th, 2009 12:40pm

neji chan

I loved this. And, as I say often, who cares if it was dark because most of life is dark anyway!

Thu, February 19th, 2009 4:08am

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yea, thanks though.

Thu, February 19th, 2009 12:45pm

laila

O god u myust be like pro! so awesome. I'm becoming your fan. nannannannanna!

Thu, February 19th, 2009 10:12am

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haha. ok thanks

Thu, February 19th, 2009 12:51pm

Night Write

YEAH!!! YOU GO GIRL! This was VERY good! Besides your sizzling words and smooth flowing sentences, to head the nail on the head! This is real life! Thank you for sharing.

Fri, February 20th, 2009 6:48pm

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thanks.. i guess..

Fri, February 20th, 2009 12:31pm

Akane Cullen

Nice! :D 4.5-ish....5-ish should be a good rating. :)

Sun, February 22nd, 2009 4:41pm

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Thanks.

Sun, February 22nd, 2009 10:45am

Loving Mallory

WOW! This has such an emotional bound! Well done.

Mon, February 23rd, 2009 4:41pm

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Yea, thanks. I wrote this pretty quickly.

Mon, February 23rd, 2009 8:43am

VictoriaDawn

another good poem :) i love your stuff! ha

Thu, February 26th, 2009 4:37am

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thanks again

Thu, February 26th, 2009 12:36pm

XxaliceheartsyouxX

chelly showed me this one yesterday and you are REALLY GOOD!! ur like amazing. a poetry god, lol [okay now i soundd dumm] but really, ur awesome i love reading ur poems cant wait to read more :]

Thu, February 26th, 2009 11:02pm

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yea, thanks.

Thu, February 26th, 2009 3:11pm

Brian W

A good emotional poem although dark it is good and flows well

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 2:24am

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yea, thanks.

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 12:31pm

JenDamsel

Wow this is really Amazing! love it! great theme and choice of words. you just won my heart lol XD
i truly loved this poem
~Jenn

Sun, May 31st, 2009 2:17am

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lol thanks :]

Sat, May 30th, 2009 7:18pm

hhhh

Truely great! This speaks to me and I really like the way you put it! Very nice!

Sun, May 31st, 2009 2:42am

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thanks

Sat, May 30th, 2009 7:43pm

XxalexandraxX

OMG. that was so gooood!! it reminds me of like song lyrics!!! i love this poem, its my favorite on booksie yet! great job. i feel the strong emotions circulating around this piece of art.

very well written, and so deppressing, but thats exactly what i like!

you will love my story "am i finally allowed to die?" may the title speak for itself....:D



WRITE ON!!!!





-alexandra

Sun, May 31st, 2009 4:16pm

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hehe, thanks a bunch.

Sun, May 31st, 2009 10:36am

swimFire

Wow, you're a really good poet. I'm clicking I like :)

Sun, May 31st, 2009 10:02pm

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Lol thankies :]

Sun, May 31st, 2009 5:20pm

Runningfoot2009

WOW! I LOVE it!!!!! Love it Love it! Did I mentio, I love it! LOL Good Job! Write on!! All we can say is wow. wow. wow. wow. :)

-Runningfoot

Mon, June 1st, 2009 6:15am

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Hehe thanks.

Mon, June 1st, 2009 1:24pm

AryaAliceLuna

So far I am greatly enjoying your work. I love your poems. As a christian I was a little concverned about the name of this one, but after reading it I see that it fits. It works and I see how the name and the line and the whole poem flows. I feel for you, to understand the pain you had to be going through to write this.

Sun, June 7th, 2009 6:55pm

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Yea, well thanks. Means alot. :]

Sun, June 7th, 2009 7:14pm

Gothalicious

i love depressing stuff and I can really connect to this being formerly depressed and a self harmer and I've attempted suicide quite a few times. I hope things get better for you. If you want I can give you my e mail address and help you through it :)=

Wed, June 10th, 2009 10:19am

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its okay. thanks abunches though. I'm better now.

Wed, June 10th, 2009 11:56am

ayrianR

wow that is a great poem

Thu, July 16th, 2009 8:43pm

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thanks

Thu, July 16th, 2009 3:26pm

aria aiedail

um, i think it's strange that people find other's pain to become their favorite poem. I'd say i like it but that's kinda degrading. Its well written, how about that?

Thu, July 16th, 2009 11:04pm

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ok. thanks?

Thu, July 16th, 2009 4:05pm

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