The fountain by the sea

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

an attempt at poetry..
this is about the cleansing power of tears..
and the relief of greiving...
a poem inspired by personal experience..
xox enjoy xox

the golden fountain by the sea
that is where i go to cry

When the pain overwhelms me
i let my tears fall andform a sea
as i bathe in the falling golden light
it's like allmy problems have taken flight.
the pain i feel is washed away.
and i can face another day.

they told me that he was gone
never again would he return
alli haveleftis the memory
and thoughts of what will never be
he went away and left me
with neither agood bye
nor a farewell,he decided to die

my tears they wash away my pain
soon i feel almostsane again
the sorrow that builds up deep inside
the excrutiating thoughts that cloud my mind
flow forthfrom the windowsof my soul
and once again.. i amwhole.
i have finallystopped running from my grief
i feel hope, joy, but most of all, i feelrelief.

the golden fountain by the sea
that is where i go to cry


Submitted: June 13, 2008

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Wandiola

This is good. I liked it, but there is till room for improvement.

Tue, June 17th, 2008 5:12pm

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thnx..
yeh i kno.. this was mii first attempt.. never been really gud at poetry..
xoxoxox
=]

Tue, June 17th, 2008 3:08pm

moonella

i really like this, it needs no improvment love it, an di no how it feels and it hurts a lot

Wed, December 24th, 2008 10:31pm

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wow.. thanks!..
x

Thu, December 25th, 2008 6:44am

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