So heres my tid bit

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
I wrote this forever and a day ago. So tell me what you like, don't like, want to get rid of, what I should add. Just basically let me know what you think ^-^

Submitted: January 27, 2010

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Are you ready to be someone else, to walk in someone else's shoes? Welcome to your new life, you have become Alana, a 19 year old college freshman. You stand about 5'6, have long blonde hair, and as most people say a perfect body. You in fact have a perfect life. Well until now that is. See something about tonight just doesn't seem to add up. You feel an odd presence around everything you do. But being you, you blow it off as nothing. \"Alana! Wait up!\" You turn to see Sam, this girl who thinks you two are best friends. But in fact she is nothing more then someone who follows you around. You quickly assess her seeing she stands at 5'4, wiry brown hair, and an okay body. You frown as she finally catches up with you. \"Hi Sam.\" You say without feeling or expression, why waste your time on someone you don't care about? Sam looks down suddenly as if disgraced to be seen. \"Hi Alana, I just....I just wanted to talk to you!\" She said excitedly looking at you. You flash your fake million dollar smile. Everyone always falls for it, you think to yourself slyly. \"Look Sam, its not that I don't want to talk to you, but I have a million things I need to do. Maybe another time okay?\" She nods and walks the opposite way looking back at you with disappointment evident in her face. You laugh to yourself and continue on your way. But the air around you doesn't feel right anymore, like someone or something is watching you. You quickly walk faster thinking your going crazy. But you would happen to be wrong on this night. Deeply and inevitably wrong. 'If only you knew what was about to happen to you, you poor sad creature.' Jezebeth thought from his place in the tree.


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