c-o-n-t-r-o-l

CONTROL.
 
I have to spell it out in my head.
CONTROL
I have to remind myself, And say it through gritted teeth.
CONTROL
I will not break. I will not break.
Mechanically I chant in my head.
CONTROL
 
Control, It’s my greatest challenge.
Control, it’s my Achilles heel.
CONTROL. IT’LL BE MY VICTORY.


Submitted: September 23, 2010

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pastthepointofnoreturn

I love this. Good job

Sun, September 26th, 2010 1:23am

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thnX for c0mmenting and reading my wrks! u hav no idea hw much i appreciate ur support!

Sun, September 26th, 2010 4:45am

gorgeousME

CONTROL!!! AHHAHHA!! i have none o that!

Wed, October 6th, 2010 10:54am

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HAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!

Thu, October 7th, 2010 4:52am

MYSTERYgirl

lost control!!!!

Sat, October 9th, 2010 10:45am

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really..

Mon, October 11th, 2010 3:58am

Shweta

Yeah! VEry true. Nice one!

Sat, October 30th, 2010 2:45am

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lol tnX

Fri, November 5th, 2010 6:44am

Benadict Jack

very nice. You would definitely expand it. show more of it, elaborate on it. well even if you don't i hope that you continue to enjoy the art!

Fri, November 12th, 2010 6:29pm

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heyy thnX!! well that wsnt suggested before! ill try to giv it a go!

Tue, November 16th, 2010 6:20am

Benadict Jack

WAIT! I mean "should definitely expand it"... not "would". Sorry for the typo!

Fri, November 12th, 2010 6:31pm

angellynn

Deep! This control, it grows in the very bowels of our being. This is very well written, but I think I would as you say spell it out.. C-O-N-T-R-O-L as the heading.

Angellynn:)

Fri, November 19th, 2010 7:11am

Vincey Delaney

very cool, so full of "Control" which I have freely conquered with my mom's terrible abusing me in the past. It's a wonderful feeling to have control of no more filth and darkness. That's my honourable control, love the freedom, love the escape!! You did fantastic here, bravo and hope you are happy with Christmas coming soon, take care and I'll be in touch!! I was pretty busy with decorating my home, I'm excited about the holidays!!

Sun, November 28th, 2010 6:40am

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