its gonna happen

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

this girl has really!
action packed adventure based....

It’s going to happen

Pouring rain darkens the afternoon sky, throwing a grey mist over my PLAN

But now, nothing can stop me, it’s going to happen. My bag is packed, I’m finally ready, I stand in my bedroom, counting down the minutes to freedom.

My nerves are frazzled but my mind’s adamant…it’s going to happen..i can sense it.

An unexpected vibration in my pocket ,jerks my thoughts to a hold. i  take my cell-phone out, ”private number” lights up the screen. clearing my voice, I say: “hello?”.no answer. more strongly I say” helloo0?”Then a voice speaks out: “ don’t. don’t do it”. who is this? I say shrilly. Who the heck is this? i repeat petrified a million thoughts race through my mind. Don’t-do-it. okay? Then the VOICE rose urgently “hear me! Don’t do it”

My hand is shaking so badly I barely hear the engaged tone in my ear. shaken to my core I collapse in a heap on the floor .the phone drops from my sweaty palm .the  loud noise wakes me up by my state. who the heck was that? Frantically I looked around ,could THEY be bugging my room? who could have gotten my number? no one and I mean no-one has my cell number. Was, was it GOD? gosh I’m just being silly .it was just a coincidental prank ,that’s all! However a shiver still crept up my back


The beep of my phone informs me that I have received a text message. my mind blank, I stiffly pick up my phone. the sms is simple. It’s a 10-digit cell number. it’s up to me, my choice do I phone or don’t I ? I begin breathing heavily. freaked outta my wits ,I dialed the number….

Ring.ring.ring. someone picks up, the VIOCE! it’s the same VOICE speaking. “I’m me at the park,you know which one……”

Then the line the goes dead…………………..

Submitted: August 19, 2010

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unknown girl

Really good. The caller stayed a mystery though. Love it

Sat, August 21st, 2010 5:28am


im thinkin of continuing it,must i giv it a go?

Sat, August 21st, 2010 5:40am

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