Can I cut deep enough?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I hate all of this.

I hate all of this

all this pain inside of me

its tearing me apart

Why cant she see?

 

Cant she see that its her

thats tearing me apart from the inside out'

that its her

that causes me to doubt?

 

Seeing her

rips my heart into peices

what the fuck gives her the right?

Who will pick up the peices?

 

no one can

no one will

no will to live

maybe I should kill?

 

Kill myself

end this pain

destroy this shit

in my brain

 

Rip and tear

slice through the pain

cut all the way

into the vein

 

Nobody will let me

take the easy road

fuck myself up

finish this mode


Submitted: February 25, 2008

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Lacey Cummings

Sweetie, I think this is an awesome poem. The emotion is so raw and intense. You're a very talented poet. Don't let some girl get you down. You have so much talent to offer the world. Love this.

Fri, February 29th, 2008 6:50pm

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It is nice to hear positive feedback.

Sun, March 2nd, 2008 4:40pm

Madame Dupree

I've got to agree with Lacey - you've got too much talent to want to kill yourself! What a waste if you weren't here to share it! There's no girl out there worth a minute of your pain. Trust me, this world is filled with bitches but without them, you wouldn't know when you've found a gem!

Thu, March 20th, 2008 8:21pm

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I think I've found one!! She just may have kicked me out of my writing slump

Thu, March 20th, 2008 10:17pm

Madame Dupree

Go get im' tiger! ;)

Fri, March 21st, 2008 5:55am

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plan on it

Thu, March 20th, 2008 11:39pm

Venus

Yeah I was about to tell you that you are a very good writer, and that no girl is worth it. But I see from your comments, that that is not necessary.
Great job!

Mon, March 24th, 2008 11:46pm

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thanx!

Sat, March 29th, 2008 9:49am

XBrokenHeartedX

Don't kill yourself! The pain is really hard, but you just have to ride it out. My life is pretty shitty, close to yours, and every minute of the day I have to hide that pain. This was still a wonderful poem, the swearing messes up the flow a bit, but still really really intense and agonizing.

Sat, March 29th, 2008 3:30am

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I didnt like that either.

Sat, March 29th, 2008 9:52am

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