'Memories'

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DONT DRINK AND DRIVE!

Memories

?Erin? (XxBlueTrumpeterxX)

I remember,

We went out,

I was drunk,

You weren't,

But I wouldn't let you drive.

_

I remember,

We were joking,

Laughing,

Having fun,

When I crossed the centre line.

_

I remember,

Lying there,

Wondering,

Where you were,

Paramedics rushed to my side.

_

I remember,

Looking,

Seeing you,

Disbelief,

All I could do was cry.

_

I remember,

Our eyes locked,

But yours,

Had gone dark,

I didn't know why.

_

I remember,

Screaming,

Begging you,

To come back,

Tears flowing the whole time.

_

I remember,

All of it,

My fault,

Living with it,

Memories burn me inside.


Submitted: March 31, 2009

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angellynn

OMG Erin this is'nt based on a true story is it?

Sad poem... Very Sad Hon! Alcohol is a murdering weapon. Please read my short story called MONSTER IN A BOTTLE.. You'll see what I mean..

Angellynn :)

Tue, March 31st, 2009 2:31am

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no this is not based on a true story. I was given the idea by a presentation given by a paramedic called Norbert Georget. He travels around North America and comes to school anf tells us just what the danger are. I was crying and nearly thew up during that presentaion. I'll be sure to read your story.

?Erin?

Mon, March 30th, 2009 7:37pm

FancyJumper

This poem almost makes me cry everytime I read it!! Really good imagery, so touching!! LOVE IT!!!

Anelise

Tue, March 31st, 2009 5:26pm

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Thanks Annie, ur awesome!

Tue, March 31st, 2009 10:27am

WerewolfGirl

ERIN!!! Pritty!!! I love it so much!!!

Wed, April 1st, 2009 1:08am

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Thanks, Quinn!!

Tue, March 31st, 2009 6:52pm

viper

This was very depressing.So sad.It is so vivid.Like I could see the whole thing happening in front of me.

Thu, April 2nd, 2009 2:56am

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I DID watch it in a school presentation... very scary

Thu, April 2nd, 2009 7:00pm

Meggie

Erin! its so sad, i almost cried. i love it!

Sun, April 19th, 2009 6:05am

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i know! i wrote it after the norbet georget guy gave that presentation

Sun, April 19th, 2009 4:37pm