I don't know where this came from, but I just sat down and wrote it and it sums things up perfectly...

Walking forwards
Trying to see the light
Everything all around in darkness.
I can see you beside me
Feel you urging me to go forwards
To walk towards invisible light.
It gets harder with every step
I’m blinded by darkness
But you’re guiding me along by the hand.
I see a glimmer
Start to get excited
I’m getting closer now.
The light gets closer
Shines brightly
Washes over me
We run to the edge
And fly.

Submitted: March 07, 2010

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Um, what can I say- wow! It's simple yet so complex. I'm sure that person feels very lucky to have you as well :-).

Sun, March 7th, 2010 8:43pm


I'm sure they do, cause I feel very very lucky to have them :)

Sun, March 7th, 2010 6:58pm

Savannah AM

That is so sweet! nice that was something i would love to read everyday!!

Tue, March 9th, 2010 2:27pm


Thank you, I appreciate what you said :)

Tue, March 9th, 2010 6:08pm

Dear Diary

Yay, it's so hopeful :)

Thu, March 11th, 2010 5:46pm


Yeah :) Thanks for commenting :)

Thu, March 11th, 2010 6:42pm

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