Poem by: xxemoxbfsxx
sad, question, eyes, painful, ok, stare
Submitted: December 29, 2007
Am I Ok?
People always say are you ok
I don't know
Look at me and tell me if I'm ok
Do I look ok
The glassy stare
The questioning eyes
The painful silence
You Tell me
Am I ok
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Wow I can actually sort of relate to what your saying, I think. I do hate it when people ask if I'm OK. Especially if I like fainted or something. Thanks for sharing.
y would ppl ask u if u ok if u faint. idk. lol.
I think that when people ask this question it is only because they don't know what else to say and they want to be nuturing. I understand what you're saying though. really nice poem
u don't get it ppl know there is sumthin wrong with me. and they still ask.
its a good poem, and yeh people don't know what else to say, so they ask that,even if they know the answer. its a stupid question but just ignoring the person would be worse at most times.
thats not the point but thx 4 the comment.
Yea, I am never sure if I am okay but ppl ask that to me too, and answer them am I okay,tell in your view do I look okay? But I'm not sure if I understood what you wrote it is somewhat vouge and clear.
that is what i meant some ppl kaap saying well the person just wants to be nice. that wasn't the point of the poem. the point is that i'm not ok. thanks foor the comment.
wow, i understand this totally. i also hate those people who ask if you're ok, but they really don't care... i hate when people ask me if i'm ok, i always lie anyways... anyways I LOVE THIS!
thanks, i understand it too. thats why i wrote it. LAWLz.
I think at every one can realate to this poem because we've all been there. Good job!
yes it is a very relatable topic. take care.
this is really good! oh and, is relatable even a word? lol!
thanks for the comment. i kknows it is.
Yea,thats true.I mean helloo?Cant they see youre sad or...But they're just worried about you(us)...lol...
This poem's totaly great.
many people have said that, but that's not really what I meant when I wrote it. Guess people got the wrong interpretation.
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