Dancing Stars

Poem by: xXloriettaXx

Summary

For my genre I put it as other because I think the genre for this is self oppinon and self hope.

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Submitted: May 24, 2010

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Submitted: May 24, 2010

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My hopes dance inside my heart. I'm going to hope till what I hope for happens.

I hope the sky with always be so blue and the sun will always shine,

Till night and that the beautiful stars will dance in the sky and in my eyes till dawn.

Beauty is on the inside, where the soul lies. In nature beauty is everywhere.

No matter your skin color or your body type you're still beautiful and nothing can ever change that.

The stars I see them gracefully dancing in the night sky under the moon light, they start to vanish at the dawn.

Stars dance in the sky till dawn appears and they vanish in the distance and the sun awakens from its shadow.

The moon vanishes with the stars and isn't seen till the night after.

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Genre: Other

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Genre: Other

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Summary

For my genre I put it as other because I think the genre for this is self oppinon and self hope.

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Caiteeee

Comment | 14 words

Mon, May 24th, 2010 5:25pm

This poem is beautiful and I felt so serene reading it. Really good work (:

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Tue, May 25th, 2010 5:53am

Thanks,

Vincey Delaney

Comment | 18 words

Wed, May 26th, 2010 12:46am

oh so lovely!!! You are very descriptive! this one surely caught my heart, Love is a magical word!!!

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Comment | 19 words

Wed, May 26th, 2010 11:12am

Thanks you, I am trying to be more descriptive in my writing. Yes love is a very magical word.

Foliostar

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Thu, May 27th, 2010 12:02pm

Great job hung on ebery word each one was magical

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Thu, May 27th, 2010 5:15pm

Thanks!!! ^.^

xxbrokenemogirlxx

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Thu, May 27th, 2010 12:51pm

great poem. i really liked it. i could imagine and see every detail in the poem, the stars and moon fading. nicely done =]

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Thu, May 27th, 2010 5:15pm

Thanks!!!! :)

the dead poet

Comment | 8 words

Sat, May 29th, 2010 8:34am

well it was good just as should be

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Sun, August 8th, 2010 11:25am

thanks XD

A7XRica

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Sun, May 30th, 2010 3:41pm

Beautiful poem. :)

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Sun, May 30th, 2010 9:44pm

Thanks

Kairi

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Tue, June 1st, 2010 1:54am

Very beautiful! :)
Bravo.

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Tue, June 1st, 2010 6:59am

Thanks!!! :)

Suicidal Thanatophobic

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Fri, July 30th, 2010 2:54pm

Well done, you managed to express your feelings with writing. Bravo

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Sun, August 8th, 2010 11:25am

Thanks. XD

Dizzy

Comment | 64 words

Mon, August 30th, 2010 4:26pm

this is very pretty, I very much enjoyed it :D
"No matter your skin color or your body type you're still beautiful and nothing can ever change that." was my favourite line.
CONSTRUCTIVE criticism: Just read over it a little bit to make sure some lines make sense or the right word/spelling is there.
But that's my only critique. Otherwise it's gorgeously wonderful!

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Mon, August 30th, 2010 4:56pm

Thanks :3