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oh so lovely!!! You are very descriptive! this one surely caught my heart, Love is a magical word!!!
Great job hung on ebery word each one was magical
great poem. i really liked it. i could imagine and see every detail in the poem, the stars and moon fading. nicely done =]
well it was good just as should be
Beautiful poem. :)
Very beautiful! :)
Bravo.
Well done, you managed to express your feelings with writing. Bravo
this is very pretty, I very much enjoyed it :D
"No matter your skin color or your body type you're still beautiful and nothing can ever change that." was my favourite line.
CONSTRUCTIVE criticism: Just read over it a little bit to make sure some lines make sense or the right word/spelling is there.
But that's my only critique. Otherwise it's gorgeously wonderful!
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