Roller Coaster Rides

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Roller Coasters to you crazily insanely but amazing people, probably make you laugh with joy, and scream with delight. Whilst we, the people who cower before those massive machines, would probably cry with fear and scream in utter terror.

Poems about Roller Coasters! From BOTH point of views! (I know, weirdly random, but hey, I'm like that! XDDD)

Roller Coasters: Laughing Sensations

Roller Coasters make me laugh in delight

Feeling the wind blow at my face

Going upside-down, going up, going down

This isn't anything like a car ride!

Gripping the handrail in front of you

Screaming as you feel different sorts of gravity

Opening your eyes and seeing the world as a blur

Oh how this brings me joy!

Happiness grips you

Along with a sudden sense of enjoyment

You love this feeling, you do!

Hearing others scream beside and around you

Hearing cheers, hearing the machine underneath you go 'Ba-Dum Ba-Dum'

All of this makes me laugh, and laugh I do!

Roller Coasters: Screaming Nightmares

Roller Coasters make me scream in horror

Feeling the wind blow at my face

Going upside-down, going up, going down

This definitely isn't anything like a car ride!

Gripping the handrail in front of you

Yelling as you feel different sorts of gravity

Opening your eyes and seeing the world as a blur

Oh how this brings me fright!

Nausea grips you

Along with a sudden sense of Vertigo

You don't like this feeling, you don't!

Hearing others scream beside and around you

Hearing cheers, hearing the machine underneath you go 'Ba-Dum Ba-Dum'

All this makes me want to cry, but cry I don't!


A/N: Hello! This is my SECOND attempt! XDD I think it's OK...

Hope this didn't bore you to near death! O-o I was thinking I'd write in two different POV'S, 'cos it was a bit more interesting like that. I elso know that the poems are both basically the same, mainly 'cos well... The poems could have two meanings I guess...

And there's somethin' wrong with da formatting... I've TRIED to fix it, but it looks fine when I'm editing it.... TT.TT

Thankee for coming! :DDDD And reading!


Submitted: February 18, 2012

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Atmosphere

Haha, really good poems! :D And how you did two of them, with different perspectives, is really good! Kmu Aden! XD

Sat, February 18th, 2012 7:46pm

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Thanks!! I really appreciate your comment Keith! :DD And really? You think so? >_< THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! X333 I really appreciate it man!

Sat, February 18th, 2012 11:48am

GuiltyPleasure

Wow! This was quite an upside down poem. Though i am more a fan of second version because i am scared of roller coasters to death. Though you get to hug your screaming girlfriend/mischievously supportive boyfriend... thats the highest side.

Sun, February 19th, 2012 12:27pm

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XDDDD THANKS! And I must say, I think I like the second one too! :DDD 'Cos Roller Coasters ain't really my buddies.... O_O And WHOA! XDDD I suppose that's the good side of it, eh?

Sun, February 19th, 2012 6:39am

aenzxlove

love it! it's soo funny :) oh yeah i have a new poem too. you'll get mad at me if I don't tell you Pb

Mon, February 20th, 2012 2:26am

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THANKS! And it is? O-o AWESOME! Thanks! ;) And don't'cha worry! I've read your AWESOME poem, and commented too! :DDD

Sun, February 19th, 2012 7:48pm

Blackmirror

Love the two perspectives of rollar coasters. Very creative! :) The writing was great. Nice job! :)

Tue, February 21st, 2012 2:10am

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Thanks:) I really appreciate your words, friend! :DDD

Tue, February 21st, 2012 12:43pm

Jimbobi

Love it Lulu, if I could choose from the two I'd be the second. Great job contrasting the emotions and descriptions like that!

Tue, February 28th, 2012 4:38am

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XDD Thanks! And I certainly agree with you pal! :D :D :D Mainly 'cos I can relate to it... XDD THANKS! ;) Another thanks for coming too! ;)

Tue, February 28th, 2012 12:44pm

nathanmarc12

I enjoyed this a lot! I love how you compare the contrasting feelings of roller coasters... but then again, roller coasters are supposed to make us feel that way, right? Anyway love your poem am giving this a like :)

Sun, March 18th, 2012 10:55am

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THANKS! XDDD Your comments make me smile buddy! And yar, roller coasters are supposed to make us feel like that but sometimes, we've gotta wonder if it's a good thing or bad. :D :D :D :D And WOW! THANKS again mate! ;)

Sun, March 18th, 2012 9:05am

brucek

hey, not bad. the fact that they are the same is to me the cool part because it shows how much the exact same words can have completely different meanings. keep writing!

Wed, March 21st, 2012 5:55am

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Hey, THANKS! XDDD I completely agree with ya, which is why I wrote it ;) Anywho~ Sure I will! Just THINKING about NOT writing is like... *Gasp* *Faints and dies*

Anyways, ANOTHER thanks for comin' mate! ;DDD

Wed, March 21st, 2012 12:31pm

Yume chan

Aw what a fantastic poem, creatively said and done! Using the two pov! Brilliant move lulu! ^^ if I gad to choose one I guess id like the first one, but honestly never been on a coaster so wouldn't actually know :) anyway, continue your amazing writing!

Sun, March 25th, 2012 1:04pm

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THANKS! XDD And WHOA! You haven't ever been on a roller coaster afore?! :OOOO WOW! XDD Shan't worry! If ya like the first POV, you'll definitely love roller coasters! XDD Thanks! I will! X33

Sun, March 25th, 2012 6:58am

esasmiley98

I like your poem
good job you are a really talented writer.

Fri, March 1st, 2013 1:36pm

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this was written five million bajillion kabillion ultra mega billion years ago. :3 thanks!!

Sat, March 2nd, 2013 4:21pm