I Only Wish

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I close my eyes

~ I Only Wish ~

 

 

I close my eyes,
As I know you are away,
You linger in my thoughts,
You are every word I want to say.

 


I wish you didn't have to miss,
Every night I go to bed,
Every morning that I wake up,
Every word to you i've said.

 


I wish you would trust,
Be by my side,
Know that every moment,
My best I have tried.

 


Be you.. for me,
Give me all,
Hold me,
Not only as I fall.

 


I open up my eyes,
Because wishes do come true,
Mine has always been,
Blowing every candle out with you.


Submitted: March 06, 2009

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Manyfacets

This a charming little poem.
Well done! Kind regards M.

Fri, March 6th, 2009 12:23pm

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=) Thank you.

Fri, March 6th, 2009 6:08am

Tigerchill

this is simply beautiful. i don't know what else to say...it's just such a lovely piece...you have my vote! take care, Tiger.

Fri, March 6th, 2009 2:44pm

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Thank you Tiger!!

Fri, March 6th, 2009 7:17pm

nuttyz

Awwwh!!...
This is soo deep and TOTALLY BRILLIANT!! ^^

Sat, March 7th, 2009 12:15pm

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thank you so much =)

Sun, March 8th, 2009 12:05am

angellynn

nice!
Very heartfelt!
I like!

Angellynn

Sun, March 8th, 2009 3:47am

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Thank you!!!

Sun, March 8th, 2009 12:05am

viper

I liked this one.You tell exactlly what you want in this.I like that.It has a nice little rhythem to it as well.

Mon, March 9th, 2009 6:34am

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thank you

Mon, March 9th, 2009 3:28am

Midnight Rose

Very charming and touching. :0)M

Thu, March 19th, 2009 11:33am

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I thank you for your kind words.

Thu, March 19th, 2009 7:04pm

Steve Sites

Very sweet and loving poem. Lucky guy, whoever he is. Well done.
Steve

Sun, March 22nd, 2009 7:16am

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Thank you very much.

Sun, March 22nd, 2009 11:15am

FairyWings

Gah! That really caught me. The last part was very touching in a way. So sweet! What else can I say? Beautiful!

Fri, April 17th, 2009 8:27am

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Thank you again!

Fri, April 24th, 2009 10:08pm

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