Together We Were Loved

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

a poem about love and betrayal, and how they affect each other.

Out of these thoughts

will come a dream

out of my eyes

will flow a stream

 hate and love

our spirits as free as a soaring dove

together we were strong

together nothing could go wrong

together we were loved


so happy we were sad

so loved that we were mad

and I stuck it through

Just for you

yet you left me standing here

sadly I still love you my dear

Yet I can never look at you the same

because that night you never came

just remember

together we were loved


all we are is a lie just waiting to be told

no longer will you have my hand to hold

our love was replaced with fear

and the worst part is

I still love you my dear

Submitted: January 29, 2007

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Fri, February 2nd, 2007 4:04pm


thanks! It was wrote for my mom...

Xx Ash xX

Fri, February 2nd, 2007 8:06am


I loved it!!!! Such deep meaning.

Thu, April 12th, 2007 9:15pm


thanks. It is a very personal poem... writen for my mother.

it has more meaning then anyone could imagine.

Xx ash xX

Thu, April 12th, 2007 4:57pm


divine wording in this, I will add this to my reading list for later research and development. Keep up the great work.

Thu, May 22nd, 2008 11:54pm


wow, thanks a lot. :) I'm honored, and glad you like it. :)

Thu, May 22nd, 2008 4:55pm


wow. i can't believe i haven't read this before now XD

great job, deffinately one of my faves (for obvious reasons) :D

Tue, November 18th, 2008 11:31pm


yeah. I wrote this a long time ago about my mom and step dad.

Tue, November 18th, 2008 6:03pm


this amazing

Mon, July 20th, 2009 1:31am



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