Her Nightmares

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

randomness, written while listening to Marilyn Manson. Not sure if it can exactly be considered a horror.


Submitted: January 10, 2010

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centorium

Nice story, love how you slowly realise Damien is more than a dream, how the twin is damaged etc etc.

Loved it really did, if I were to improve it maybe rename Damien as the name seem to cliché, and put more emphasis on her cutting herself. "she cuts" isn't nearly as powerful as "I watched in silence as once more she dragged the razorblade over her skin" or something like it.

Keep writing and have a look at my stuff etc etc :)

Mon, January 11th, 2010 1:11am

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thank you for your comment. thinking of it, Damian is kinda cliche. but he's named after somebody, so I'm gonna keep his name the way it is.

Sun, January 10th, 2010 6:53pm

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