Coming Out!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Gay and Lesbian  |  House: Booksie Classic

hey this is my first short story that i've every written so its not that good but please tell me what you think

Coming Out!
I sat there, on the edge of my bed nervous as hell. Today was the day I decided to come out to my mother. I wasn’t sure how it would go; they never showed signs of homophobia yet they never showed any liking to gay people. I’m only 15 so I figured they might think it was just a phase but I know I’m sure.
My mum was out at the shops, and she would arrive home any minute, my hands were shaking and I decided to call my girlfriend.
“Hello” she answered
“Hey babe it’s Rach” I answered
“Hey Hun, have you told her yet?” She questioned
“Not yet she’s at the shops” I replied
“Everything will be fine, if not we’ll run away together” she joked; I gave a small smile and thought about how I met my girl.
I was working at McDonalds doing the late shift when I served her. I couldn’t help but smile as she flirted with me.
“What time is your break?” she asked I was shocked wondering why she was asking
“In fifteen minutes, why” I asked she smiled at me and my heart raced.
“Maybe we could get a coffee and get to know each other” she said
“Babe are you there?” she asked I smiled
“Yeah I was I remembering when we met” I answered
“I love you” she said, every time she said it my heart raced and I wanted to hold her in my arms
“I love you too babe” I replied still smiling, until I heard the front door close, and I knew mum was home.
“Babe I have to go my mum’s home” I said nervously
“Remember everything will be ok, I’m going to come round, ill there in half an hour”
“It’s ok you don’t have to” I said, I wasn’t sure how mum would react to me coming out and meeting my girlfriend in one day
“Honey I know your nervous but she will be fine with it and I want to meet her” she answered.
I thought about it for a minute.
Cloey had been waiting to meet my mother for a year and a half now but I was too scared because I thought my mother would be able to tell we were together.
“Ok Hun ill see you then” I answered; I knew she was smiling on the end having gotten her own way.
“I love you, bye” she said, I told her I loved her too and hung up the phone.
I walked down the stairs slowly trying to buy myself some time.
“Hey sweetie” my mum called out
“Hey mum can we talk?” I asked, my mum gave me a worried look, she knew I hadn’t been well lately, keeping to my room even when people came over.
“Yeah sure darl take a seat,” she said.
I went over to her and took a seat next to her on the lounge.
“Ok what’s wrong?” she asked
I decided it wouldn’t be good if I just came out and said I was gay in one hit so I decided to stretch it out.
“I’ve met someone” I said, my mum smiled
“Honey that’s great I was beginning to get worried” she said, I held back and small laugh; my mother was getting worried because I hadn’t ever had a boyfriend.
“We’ve been together for a year and a half” I said, my mother gave me a shocked look,
“Why didn’t you tell me?” she asked
“Because her name is Cloey,” I said, my mum had to think for a second.
“It’s… a girl” she stammered I got worried at her reaction and began fumbling with my hands till she held them in her own.
“Hey I’m sorry I just never saw this coming” she said and I let out a sigh of relief and then the doorbell rang.
“One second sweetie” mum said and she to open the front door and she saw my girlfriend for the first time.
“Hi I’m Cloey” she said and my mum let out a tear and pulled my girlfriend in for a hug and I knew everything was going to be ok.

Submitted: February 07, 2010

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Brian W

At the end when your Mum answered the door and gave Chloe a hug I had a tingle go through me. For the story content. You had good description and detail and it kept me interested and wanting to read more.

Sat, March 27th, 2010 11:12pm


thanks heaps this is the first story i have put on this site and i really appreciate the feed back :)

Sun, March 28th, 2010 7:06pm


I really loved this short story. The ending was really sweet too :) x

Sat, April 3rd, 2010 6:04pm


Aw, this is adorable. I love it ^_^

Sun, April 18th, 2010 7:24am


hey thanks :)

Fri, April 23rd, 2010 5:28am


hi emz, wow..nice story girl! keep it up.

By the way, im having a problem with my computer i accidentally deleted your commet. can you post another comment again? seeing someone leaving a comment in my story is making me happy and inspired to write. Anyway, chapter 2 will be posted soon. im planning to write about 5 or 6 story. its going to be a compilation. "My Bestfriend, My Girlfriend, My first Love That Never Last is the 1 story. All of the story is "A True Story". hope you always find time to read my story. Thank you for reading and have a nice day.

Mon, May 10th, 2010 9:04pm


hey thanks and now worries ill comment again and ill always find time :)

Wed, May 12th, 2010 2:11pm


thank you for your time. i will also read yours. =b

Thu, May 13th, 2010 1:30am


thankyou :)

Thu, May 13th, 2010 5:53pm


This was great!! You should write more stories!!!

Sat, May 15th, 2010 9:26pm


thanks im workin on one at the moment :)

Sat, May 15th, 2010 3:50pm


I love this. (: I wish my parents were as understanding as your mom was. The ending was really sweet. :D

Fri, July 23rd, 2010 7:10pm


thanks heaps and sorry ur parents wernt as understanding it sucks wen they arnt...

Sat, July 24th, 2010 11:49am

Kween Kannabiss

I really appreciate your work!! Its really refreshing to read lesbian literature that’s NOT erotica, ya know?? Not that I have anything against erotica its just that, its important to tell our stories a different type of way… One of the reasons I am currently working on Lipstick, its romance not erotica, I’m partial to even put a sex scene in it because I don’t want it to be interoperated as erotica…. Well know I’m babbling!!! Anyway kudos to you and keep up the good work!

Mon, August 9th, 2010 12:06pm


hey thanks a lot i really appreciate it, and i defentely know what you mean :)

Thu, August 12th, 2010 9:39pm

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