Poem by: xXxSophzxXx
Submitted: July 08, 2011
Hateful stares, judgmental thoughts
whispering sounds, unease thoughts
light & dark
black & white
day & night
What is the difference?
What is the indifference?
Can they mix?
Why won't they mix?
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I like this.(:
but don't you think at the en where you wrote:"why can't they mix? can they mix?"
souldn't it be: can they mix? why won't they mix?
Idk it's just a thought lol. good work though!
=] I like your suggestion and thanks for the feedback
The topic you address is can be interpreted in many different ways, which I appreciate that in writing. Nice job!
The way that you presented the opposites in a similar manner promotes the tone in the poem that I think you wanted to portray. Very well written.
Thank u Aatifah
This poem rings true for me."really nice"
Thank u Michael
There are so many messages in this poem that called out to me and I think you intended this to relate to each person differently. Its really inspirational and my favourite piece of your work :)
xxxxxxxxxxxxx Thank u Thomascoutts
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