a symbolical explanation for heart break

Through the nights sky

I catch a glimpse

of daylights lie

a sigh of relief

i used to believe i was okay

a lie

there is no comfort in yet another day

i try and try

to find new hope

but i dont

grasp the concept in order to cope

throught the sunlight

the pain follows

an insuferable bite

to my heart it swallows

still birds pass me by

 i dont feel safe

just another one of natures lies

Submitted: February 14, 2010

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That was really good. I wish I could write poems like that.


Sun, February 14th, 2010 3:49pm


simply beautiful... :)

Sat, February 20th, 2010 11:23am


SO good. I love it. I like the rhymong words.
Would you mind reading some of my stuff? I'd highly appreciate it. Thanks!

Tue, March 16th, 2010 10:15pm


I like this. Please take a look at my poem Insomnia, And read my story called Creation's End.

Fri, July 30th, 2010 7:46pm


sure thing

Fri, August 6th, 2010 1:33am

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