Through the nights sky
I catch a glimpse
of daylights lie
a sigh of relief
i used to believe i was okay
a lie
there is no comfort in yet another day
i try and try
to find new hope
but i dont
grasp the concept in order to cope
throught the sunlight
the pain follows
an insuferable bite
to my heart it swallows
still birds pass me by
i dont feel safe
just another one of natures lies
Submitted: February 14, 2010
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beautiful
simply beautiful... :)
SO good. I love it. I like the rhymong words.
Would you mind reading some of my stuff? I'd highly appreciate it. Thanks!
I like this. Please take a look at my poem Insomnia, And read my story called Creation's End.
Fri, July 30th, 2010 7:46pm
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sure thing
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That was really good. I wish I could write poems like that.
Sun, February 14th, 2010 3:49pm:)