There's fire on the mountain 1

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
Alright I have this one short story it's written in 2 or 3 this is number 1 This was just for fun and Gabe you'll know him better in number 2 right now he's just a stranger to Valerie tanks for reading

Submitted: August 30, 2010

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Valerie’s P.O.V Valerie thought about her life then with another drag she inhaled a small smile came upon her lips there was some interesting things on the floor but her eyes felt blurred and seeing the people in the party were jumping and dancing to the beat then slowly Jake took her waist and she gave a small smile her cigarette fell to the floor and she herself grunted in amusement Jake took her to the couch in his living room he was grinning and gave her a small smile with a look of longing he pulled her into an embrace and she gave him a look of wanting. He turned to the other side and lighted another smoke and gave her a little grin then her eyes caught site of Gabe the total loner in the corner he was staring at her not with admiration or anger but with curiosity then she turned back to Jake and he cupped her chin and gave her a small kiss that in 2 minutes later was a full make out slowly they pulled away and lighted another smoke. She remembered he was the one who had thought her who had made her get addicted. He was the one who had entranced her into the feeling of taking a drag. Now as she inhaled jack’s own dropped in surprise almost a look of fear “What” she whispered “What’s wrong” Jack seemed to have lost his voice he unpeeled away from her and crushed his cigarette “Fire” he said hoarsely that was all Valerie needed to hear she turned around and closed her eyes “Shit” But the fire was leaping then out of no way Valerie saw it wine about to fall on that little fire her boyfriend was pouncing on. Before she knew it the wine poured its liquid and Increased the fire Valerie stood up everyone was panicking Jake was in the fire she was seeing him burn into a crisp she screamed in horror and turned away to feel sick and to cry and she ran out of the door. Safely she had called 911 and had waited in an hour later she was on the floor sobbing and weeping. The fire department guy stared at her and was holding a crumpled cigarette “This was what caused it someone didn’t match it before it’s fire appeared” her voice ceased as she stared at him “Where was it located” Horrifying the guy pointed to where Valerie had been sitting and taking all the drag she could get. The tears came out of her eyes then she fell to the floor again still sobbing the guy peered at her “Who owns the house” she gulped and stared at him but her vision was blurred thanks to her tears “My boyfriend Jake Winters” Silence “And where is he?” the silence increased “he’s dead” there was a whole pain in her heart she had just realized what she had done she had killed her boyfriend. The only person she saw through her tears was Gabe and he clearly was coming over all he did was take her by the arm and all she could do was cry on him. The only word he said was “shh… it’s alright.”


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