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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Memoir  |  House: Booksie Classic

I first have a draft of it in my phone, and have posted it on Facebook last Nov. 2011. I wrote this poem to show and tell how I am sorry for what I did last time, to my friend... Well, yeah, I thought we all knew that no one is perfect, but we can be better in time. It just need time and determination to overcome problems like this.

Can't stop thinkin' of you, can't stop caring for you, 
Can't stop loving you, my friend. my dear
Until my last breathe i'll show you that i care for you
Even if you don't care 'bout me anymore,

I'm really sorry about what I did to you last time
I didn't meant to hurt you
But still even if you're mad at me
Even if you're angry with what i did to you before
Still I care for you no matter what,
Even if you seemed not to care for me no more

I'm really sorry to what I did to you
Sorry I didn't meant to hurt you,
You can't stop me for saying sorry 
For what I've done to you,

I think it's the biggest mistake I've ever made
And I'll be asking for ypur forgiveness
For what I did to you,

Until my last breathe, I will show you my care
Because I do care for you
Even if you don't even care for me anymore...

_hoping you could give me one more chance_



~Jhierren Paz

Submitted: April 04, 2012

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Loved it, you should visit my page and read some of the things i have written.

Wed, April 4th, 2012 11:37am


I am glad that you love it. Thanks. Yeah, sure I'll read them. It was my pleasure then.^_^

Wed, April 4th, 2012 5:06am

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