a visit to a friend's house

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she is a poor girl and got a rich friend, she is on visit to her rich friend's girl house. she goes to the first time and she is so amazed, to see what happens read the story.

Submitted: January 01, 2013

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IT WAS A GOOD AFTERNOON AND MY FRIEND, SARA CALLED ME ON THE PHONE.

SHE SAID SHE WOULD CELEBRATE HER BIRTHDAY AT THE MIDNIGHT AND ASKED WETHER IT WAS OK FOR ME TO SPEND THE WHOLE DAY WITH HER AND FRIENDS AND HAVE A SLEEPOVER THERE.
IT WAS TOO HARD TO SAY NO, I WANTED TO SEE  HER HOUSE ,SPECIALLY WHEN HALF OF MY FRIENDS SAID HER HOUSE IS SO LARGE AND SHE HAD MANY GAMES.

I ACCEPTED AND WAS THERE BY 4:00PM

I WAS WEARING NEW DRESS THAT I KEPT FOR THESE TERMS.
I ENTERED WITH A SMALL GIFT IN MY BAG THAT NO ONE COULD SEE.
I HAD MY BEST PYJAMAS BECAUSE I NEVER WENT TO A SLEEPOVER.
I RANG THE BELL. THE DOOR OPENED, AND I WAS STRAIGHT ENTER.
BUT WHAT DID I SAW?? I SAW WHAT MY EYES DID NOT SEE BEFORE.
THAT WAS A VERY LARGE HOUSE WITH A SWEET GREEN GARDEN.
I CHANGED MY CLOTHES AND STARTED ROAMING THE HOUSE WITH A SPARKLED EYE.
SHE HAD SUCH A BIG ROOM, AND TOO MUCH GAMES I NEVER SAW!
I DID NOT TAKE TIME IN AND ENTERED QUICKLY TO SIT WITH FRIENDS.
WE HAD TOO MUCH FUN, THERE WAS NO STAIRS TI GO DOWN, THERE WAS A BIG SLIDE AND UNDER IT A BIG PILLOW.
IT WAS TOO MUCH FUN FOR ME, I NEVER JUST TASTED FUN.
WE WENT TO SLEEP FOR THE BIRTHDAY AT NIGHT.
NIGHT CAME, I WAS READY WITH THE DRESS.
IT WAS PINK IN COLOUR AND TALL TO THE LEG, I WAS DOWN BY THE ELEVATOR.
WHEN I WAS DOWN I SAW TOO MUCH PEOPLE, HER UNCLE,HER AUNT, HER FATHER,HER MOTHER AND MORE,
I JUST COULD NOT COUNT THEM./that's just for today and we will complete tommorow the rest of the story.......see you tommorow...


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