Because it just already started
Submitted: May 18, 2010
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oh so beautiful and heartwarming!!! Love it, love it!!!Great, keep it up!!!
Sat, May 8th, 2010 2:30pmoh so beautiful and heartwarming!!! Love it, love it!!!Great, keep it up!!!
Sat, May 8th, 2010 2:30pmoh so beautiful and heartwarming!!! Love it, love it!!!Great, keep it up!!!
Sat, May 8th, 2010 2:31pmoh so beautiful and heartwarming!!! Love it, love it!!!Great, keep it up!!!
Sat, May 8th, 2010 2:31pmLovely poem :) I just have one suggestion: Perhaps in sections where you want the reader to linger on what you say maybe break up sentences into shorter lines. For example,
This is coming from my heart
Nothing more
Or less
I really do feel this way;
I love you
I think something like this just makes it a tad more powerful. Either way it was a fantastic read! :)
awwww that is touching!
Thu, May 20th, 2010 8:39amA Amazing truly your words are carefully chosen! please check my novel with child by a vampire! thankyou! ")
Sat, May 22nd, 2010 8:14amWow. Your a talent :)
Word choice was spot on, and very beautiful.
Hey really great message and solid writing.
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oh so beautiful and heartwarming!!! Love it, love it!!!Great, keep it up!!!
Sat, May 8th, 2010 2:30pmAuthor
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Thank you for your wonderful comment :)
Sat, May 8th, 2010 8:01am