Youre Judging Eyes.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is about basically feeling like you are geting judge or being judge, everyones different for a reason no ones perfect our imperfections makes who we are, I hope you can relate to this i dont really know what else to write in this summary :)!

You’re Judging Eyes

You’re judging eyes pierce through me like knives,

Giving me chills right down to my spine

Why start criticizing everybody’s lives?

When you don’t even know

 Everyone’s baggage including mine

Your recurring stare

Leaving me uneasy

 When all you do is glare

I don’t even know what goes through your mind

Maybe it’s me overthinking it all

Then again…

Just one look in your eyes

Pierce through me like knives,

I can’t get over this

I’m trying to get away but my eyes

 Are unclear of the exists

I don’t want to feel this way,

You’re leaving me here feeling numb

I try to get away but my feet sadly stay

Your eyes are so haunting,

Trying to find unpromising peace

My hands start to shake

My head beings to wonder

How is this so easy for you?

Do you even realize you’re doing?

Then it all starts repeating

Over and over again

Will it happen every time you start feeling blue?

That’s my only clue

I’m so sick and tired of this

Trying to resist but I can’t seem

To get away

But todays the day,

My feet will slowly move

I got nothing to loose

My eyes won’t be interlocked in yours

Because todays the day

You’re judging eyes

 Won’t longer pierce through me like knives.


Submitted: February 23, 2013

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Cody S. D. Crum

This wasn't bad. There were a couple of typos I think?
"I got nothing to *lose*"
Judgement is a harsh emotion, you capture that in this piece.

Sun, February 24th, 2013 3:22am

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Thank you and yeah that was a typo i type super fast and thank you im glad you liked it :)

Sat, February 23rd, 2013 8:34pm

InfinityAndBeyond

I really like the way you expressed judgement and the piercing like sharp eyes, good repetition :-)

Sun, February 24th, 2013 11:09am

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Thank you im so glad you liked it :)!

Sun, February 24th, 2013 8:16am

hillaryanne

This is beautiful, I can really relate. You should probably go back and proofread though. But other than that it's really great :)

Sun, February 24th, 2013 12:30pm

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Awweh im so glad you can relate and that you likes it and im coing to change a few mistakes really soon

Sun, February 24th, 2013 8:17am

Jim Green

I like this. I hit the like button. I love the line in the introduction "our imperfections make you who you are". I couldn't agree more. People do tend to give us the "hard look" and sometimes they do feel just like a knife. And as far as typos go, I don't focus on them. Everyone has them. Its part of our imperfections and it makes us unique. I would rather focus on the whole picture, rather than get caught up in the single brush strokes.

Thu, January 25th, 2018 1:04pm

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