His name is Chris

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A girl who hasnt seen her boyfriend in two days finds out the shocking truth

His name is Chris
the reason why i exist
His dirty blond hair and bright blue eyes
I love his outsides but more so whats inside

He dropped me off two days ago,
haven't seen him since
Late one night I lay on the couch and turn the local news on
A robbery here a robberythere a fire somewhere east of where I live
A boy had been shot thats no surprise seeing as I live in a rough spot
As im about to close my eyes I spot the picture of the boy
I know that face, that dirty blond hair, those bright blue, that crooked smile

I'm glued in my spot, cant even breathe
my eyes are frozen on the tv screen
the anchor woman talks about the death
I wish i was dreaming i wish it wasnt true
but I know as sure i know that face its him
she said the boy died that night and his name was chris


Submitted: March 20, 2010

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i hate kung fu frogs

Omg... that's so sad.
Oh my... this makes me want to cry almost...
I love this so much. I'm totally sending you a fan request (but I'm gonna read some more first hehe. XD)

Mon, March 22nd, 2010 6:40pm

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Okay...thanks LOLZ :)

Mon, March 22nd, 2010 11:41am

LiLVaL

aww this poem is so sad but I really liked it

Thu, March 25th, 2010 4:17pm

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Thank you :) I'll check out ur stuff :)

Thu, March 25th, 2010 11:32am

makaylaluvsyoo13

awwwww, thats so sad! My tears swelled up and I realized that the boy who she liked was the one who got shot. your really good.

Only one suggestion. In the second stanza there were rhyming words in the same line, & I just thought that they should be different lines instead of the same line. thats just my opinion tho.

I'm going to read more now.

xx Makayla :D

Sat, March 27th, 2010 12:31pm

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Thank you...ur right about that they should've been in different lines....THXX again :0

Sat, March 27th, 2010 6:23am

SmilingAppearances

D= =0 THAT WAS SAD!!

Tue, March 30th, 2010 2:45am

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Yeah....:(

Mon, March 29th, 2010 8:03pm

msandreacullen

awww.. i feel like crying now!
i would just like her!
awwwwwwwwwwwww! (tears in eyes)
uqh! anyywhoou keep reading ++ writting!

Sat, April 24th, 2010 7:15pm

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Thank you......I will alwyas read and write

Fri, April 30th, 2010 5:46pm

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