The dark and the voices

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

How i've been felling for the past few days

I hear the words in my head
life is better off if you were dead
I cant help them being there
they fill my head very slowly

I sit in the dark cold room
no company but the voices in my head
I have no gun, no knife,
no way to kill myself tonight

The pain is deep and hurts so bad
I cant find another way out
It kills me with each day I go on
Keep fighting and never give up
Those words seem useless when I know they're right
but I just dont wanna live tonight

I hear the voices in my head
life is better of if you were dead
I cant help them but I want them to leave
So maybe tongiht i can sleep with ease


Submitted: March 20, 2010

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Foliostar

I'll be prayin 4 u liked the rhythm this poem has

Sun, March 21st, 2010 4:05am

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Thx...

Sun, March 21st, 2010 9:37am

Foliostar

I gotta tell you there is hope there people out there that care and there is someane up above who has always cared even when the rest seem to be gone. Before Jesus died he was considered the lowliest instead of being something great the world lead others to believe he was just a poor carpenter  That lived a pure life. Because of that no one accepted him except for people who believed in his father. He knows the feeling of being alone              because there's something different in him.  God can use that difference in you for good.   I too dealt with simiar circumstances until I found him and a good church. I still struggle with it but Now I know that he loves me no
matter what. And that he remembers me.  

Sun, March 21st, 2010 4:31am

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Your completley right on that..I jus gotta wrk it on tho

Sun, March 21st, 2010 9:37am

SmilingAppearances

=O WHOA! i love this 1!!

Tue, March 30th, 2010 2:56am

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Thxx thats always nice to hear...glad u liked it :)

Mon, March 29th, 2010 8:03pm

mizzmt

D': Awwwww so sad! Very deep and tragic, love it

Tue, March 30th, 2010 8:15pm

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Thank you :) ur comment means alot to me

Tue, March 30th, 2010 1:19pm

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