Blood and Fire

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A Poem about a bargain made with a demon, and the consequences.

Blood and Fire

Beware mortal, what you become
Some things cannot be undone
And this is one
O this is one
From destiny you cannot run.

For riches pall and beauty fades
O why keep up such sick charades
So call for blades 
Now kill the maids
And spill their blood across the glades.

Foolish mortal now you’re mine
Bound up tight by killings nine
Crossed the line
Your soul is mine
My victory it feels divine.

Bargains made in blood and fire
Consequences will be dire
Check your ire
Blood and fire
Throw yourself upon the pyre.

Submitted: March 02, 2014

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J E Hunter

Ah, people never will learn will they? Bargains with demons, the devil, etc. always screw you over in the end. The flow is amazing, I literally chanted this to myself a few times because of it- it just rolls off the tongue. I really can't think of anything to critique here, it's all done very well, good job!

Sun, March 2nd, 2014 2:26am


Thanks J E, glad you liked it.

Sun, March 2nd, 2014 5:02pm

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