Typical Saturday Night
It’s a typical Saturday night.
We used to laugh till the end of time,
Till the end of sweet midnight.
Till the moon loses it’s wise light.
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It’s a typical Saturday night.
We used to lay on the beach
With a very gentle breeze.
With a white sand on our cheeks.
You would whisper in my ear and tell
Me what I want to hear.
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It’s a typical Saturday night, do you remember when
Your name was on my lips?
And your soul was on my soul?
There was nothing better than you and me together
In a world we called it ‘‘Forever’’.
Oh, “please say you do still remember.”
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But now that you got sick with a mind disease
And heart bleed.
There’s nothing I could do, but only sing to your heart delight.
Making you fall asleep. Honey, ‘‘Sweet Dreams, Sweet Dreams’’.
Holding your hand till you take your last breath.
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It’s a typical Saturday night
And you’re dying in front of my eyes.
My black mascara is melting, melting on your loving eyes.
My tear drops aren’t pure anymore.
Not even pure enough to heal your soul.
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You died on Saturday night.
I buried you in the deep, blue ocean full of our loving emotions
I hope you would remember my love potion.
There will be no more blueberry mornings
There will be no more shiny stars that were once glowing bright. “They’re dead now”.
There will be no more blueberry kisses.
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You died on Saturday night.
Your lips were blue; I kissed them and buried you with my black tears that were dropping on you.
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It’s a typical Saturday night .
I’m lying near the ocean, remembering how you told me
Your sweet little lies on our sweet midnight.
How you spelled my name, it was as holy as heaven’s word.
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It’s a typical Saturday night.
I’m lying near the ocean, remembering how you stared in my eyes, telling me those three words one thousand times.
They were a live, and now they’re just echoes spinning in my mind.
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It’s a typical Saturday night.
I’m lying on a white bed.
I’m very old at age; I’m not an exotic flower anymore.
I’m just waiting death, when do it will ring my doorbell.?
When.?
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On a typical Saturday night.
I heard whispers at night saying; “Soon, Soon”
I knew that it was you.
Oh, you still love me even I’m look like an old perfume.
I calmed my heart, closed my eyes.
And I died on a typical Saturday night
***
Submitted: May 15, 2014
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Just by reading this, you make it seem like it truly happened to you and now you're literally pouring your heart out. A big like from me!
Thu, May 15th, 2014 8:01pm
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Thank You so much for your time for reading and for commenting.
Thank You :)
Wauw, impressive poem. A like from me :) keep up the good work
Thu, May 15th, 2014 8:48pm
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Oh,Thank You so much
Thu, May 15th, 2014 2:31pm
Great poem! I write poems to but sometimes I like to say I find poems when they aren't necessarily personal but I write them about something that inspired me! Great job and thanks for reaching out! :-)
Thu, May 15th, 2014 11:36pm
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Thank You for reading and for commenting too.
Thank you.
I'm actually very impressed! You're really talented. Keep it going =J
Fri, May 16th, 2014 12:59am
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Thank You !
i really appreciated to you
OMG!! This was so beautiful and sad at the same time. And at the end after all those years she still loved him and never forgot him! Just so sweet!!
Fri, May 16th, 2014 2:51am
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Oh,Thank You so much Nikki for your time for reading it and for such a beautiful comment that made me so happy :)
once again thank you :)
I really enjoyed this. Loved the word play, the imagery and the emotion invested in it really came across well to me.
Fri, May 16th, 2014 9:12am
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Thank You so much for your time for reading it and for commenting,i really appreciated a lot to you.
Thank You :)
I gave it a like. This a very beautiful poem Yulia I really like it ;).
Fri, May 16th, 2014 12:49pm
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Thank You for reading it and for commenting too.
I really appreciated a lot to you
Thanks!
Beautiful and sweet poem! ~Poetic
Fri, May 16th, 2014 3:31pm
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Oh,Thanks for this idea and i will make sure to do it
thanks!
Wow, that was very interesting. I really liked the movement of time through out the piece?
Sat, May 17th, 2014 12:19am
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Oh,Thank you so much for reading it and for commenting too.
I really appreciated a lot to you :)
Thanks:)
This was such a beautiful and heartwarming poem you portrayed here. You made a typical Saturday into something as pure as gold,i really like the whole flow of the poem. Also i liked how you showed her emotions of him dying in front of her, and her makeup ruining, but not even caring. But i did love the twist in the end when death actually comes knocking on her door,and she see's the man she loved for so long, even though she's an old woman now. And i could feel so many emotions swirling up inside me towards the end when she closed her eyes, and she sees him again. But i do hope they're in their own special place where their overpowering love can bloom once again. :}
Sat, May 17th, 2014 2:49am
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OH,Thank You so much for such a beautiful comment,really made me happy. AND thank you for your time for reading it and for commenting,i really appreciate a lot to you :)
Thanks!
Yulia....you really know how to
do emotional pieces..this is too
good for works..i love poetry especially
good ones like this.I hope I could give you
more than one like but sigh I can't so you sure get
one like from me...and oh yes..do do keep me updated if
you are updating another masterpiece work in future:):):)
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OH, thank you Aparma for such a beautiful comment, really made me happy :)and yes of course i will keep you up dated.
Thank You Dear So Much! :)
i love it.................i am speechless..it is so beautiful and sentimental piece.it enchants me with the sheer of its great power that nudges its way through my whole body...................well done...........you deserve all the best ..............you are such a great inspiration
Sat, May 17th, 2014 1:25pm
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Thank You so much for your time and for reading it, and for commenting too.I really appreciate a lot to you.
Thank You MY dear :)
Wow, this is absolutely amazing! There is so much heart and soul written in this piece, and it's SO cute and romantic! This piece tells such a great story, and I like how each stanza began with Saturday night. This is really impressive, probably one of the best poems you have :) Reading this made me think about how nice it would feel to be happy with the person you love and spend every last moment with them. This piece definitely proves that true love never dies :3 Well done! ~Brianna~
Sat, May 17th, 2014 4:19pm
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OMG,Thank You So Much Brianna for such a beautiful comment
that made me really HAPPY :).
Your comments are always the best and are always cheerful :)
Thank You So Much My Dear:)
Nice Poem:)
Sat, May 17th, 2014 8:16pm
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Thanks!
Sat, May 17th, 2014 3:11pm
This is a really powerful poem. It takes your emotions on a journey through life and death. The imagery is brilliant. really accomplished piece.
regards
Chris
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Oh,Thank You so much Chris.
Thank you for your time for reading it and for commenting.
I really appreciate a lot to you :)
Thank You :)
I love this. And the whole typical Saturday night thing was just so amazing and sad. It gives the poem an easy young feeling even when she's growing older. Wow, just wow. I loved this and you did an awesome job
Sun, May 18th, 2014 5:49pm
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Thank You so much for your time for reading it and for commenting too.
I really appreciate a lot to you:)
Thank You :)
This is not a typical Saturday night this is a very special Saturday night. A very beautiful piece of work.
Mon, May 19th, 2014 7:14am
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OH,Thank You Alex so much.
I really don't know how to appreciate to you.
Thank You My Dear! :)
Oh my god! I once did a short story like this and I loved this one more. That was so emotional! lol. I like the title. I saw that you asked me about it but I wasn't online for the whole week last week and now I'm paying in a long line of reading request lol. But that was really well written and I'd like to see more of your writing like always.
Mon, May 19th, 2014 12:51pm
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Oh,Thank You so much Twin sister :)
I really appreciate a lot to you. :)
Your comment made me happy :)
Thank You Twin Sister :)
It's impressive, beautiful, and sad all at once. Bravo :)
Mon, May 19th, 2014 4:52pm
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Thank you so much for reading it and for commenting too.
I really appreciate a lot to you.
Thank You! :)
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artie1947
what a most wonderful piece of work, you have put alot of your soul into this, and it shows, well done.
Thu, May 15th, 2014 5:55pmAuthor
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Oh,Tank You Artie for your time and for reading it,and for commenting :) I really appreciate a lot to you.
Thu, May 15th, 2014 11:05amThank You :)