It's a velvet night
With a silver lights
And the world is quite
Like a sleeping child
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I'm laying on a sandy beach , counting shiny stars
I can smell blue perfume, coming from the lonely ocean
Am I in love?
Or is it just lying emotion
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It may be a secret
But not forever
It may be a curse
But not tonight, because my love is shining bright
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We don't need nobody
Cause we got each other
Or at least I pretend him in my head
Because actually he doesn't exist
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He is just an idea of softness
He is just an idea of smoothness
He is just an image of happiness
He is nothing, but a velvet touch
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It's a velvet spring
With an autumn leaves
And the world is peaceful
Like the deep, dark sea
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I'm watching as the clouds passing above of me
I can feel the eastern and western wind in my soul
But in my mind it is still summer
Still that hot weather
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I love lazy nights on sunny shores
I love how we play and fight
We can do it forever
It's just energy
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I may still live in my dreams
Like a child afraid of his fears
Or so immature to live
Or even so weak to leave
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I created this love and made it alive
To show you how does it feel
To love someone who is not real?
Who is just an image in your dreams
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I can dream forever
It's a freedom
But I will die young
Because this love is like a venom
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He is just an idea of being in love
He is just an idea of being hurt
He is just an image of pain
He is nothing, but a velvet touch
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His soul is brightly colored
His mind is amazingly admired
He is as proud as national anthem
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I can dream forever
It's a freedom
But I'll die young
Because this love is like sugar venom
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Winter will go
Summer will come again
Everything will stay the same
And he will stay as a velvet touch on my skin
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"Thank you so much for reading and for commenting
your comments are always greatly appreciated"
Yulia
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Submitted: October 02, 2014
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Wow! This poem is so honest and deep. I love the line 'To love someone who is not real, who is an image in your dreams' and 'He is just an idea of being in love, he is just and idea of being hurt'. I really really like the message behind this poem and the way you put it in words. Great work, Yuliana! :) -Amy
Fri, October 3rd, 2014 4:43am
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Oh,thank you so much for reading it and for commenting,really appreciated.thank you!!!
Fri, October 3rd, 2014 5:27pm
Very nice. I love the idea because sea is very romantic and just staring at it would really make anyone have these thoughts, you've turned into a poem
Mon, October 6th, 2014 11:25pm
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Thank you so so much for reading it and for commenting,your comments are always greatly appreciated :)
Thank You!!
I like it :) it's beautiful. Romantic and a little sad at the same time.. I also like your rhythm that you used :)
Wed, October 8th, 2014 6:56pm
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Merci.thank you so much for reading it and for commenting.Your comments are always greatly appreciated...Thank You!!!!
Fri, November 28th, 2014 8:27am
Wow yulia that was really perfect and great that nudge its way through my heart
Sat, October 25th, 2014 2:39pm
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Thank you dear for reading it,it really means to me so much.Thank you so much!!!
Fri, November 28th, 2014 8:29am
good work yulia..just adore your works...
your poems are more than poems I could say...
the title itself is so catchy....and thanks a bunch
dear for checking on me...:):):)
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OH,What a beautiful comment you've sent me!...
Thank you so much for reading it and for commenting
Your comments are always greatly appreciated...
Thank You Dear... :)
He is just an idea of being in love....Wow.I loved it...I think,I do feel that 'lying emotion' at times....great work I must say...like!
Thu, February 12th, 2015 3:21pm
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Thank you so much,your comment is greatly appreciated.
Thank you so much :)
Nice poem... thoughts are showcased in proper way.I like ur writing style
If u get time then have a look at my new poem
http://www.booksie.com/poetry/poetry/shwetank/lonely-she
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Thank you for reading it and for commenting,really appreciated.
and sure I'll make sure to check yours when i can...
People do find comfort in knowing they are in love with something they have never seen, and seeing the image in their head, that imaginery friend becomes a best friend, and a perfect love. They will meet years down the line, growing old together. I find stories like this magical and beautiful, and you write it like it was going through that whole journey.
The emotions are as colourful as the words you write, and you make just the slightest comfort make the heart warm when she thinks of him, and that keeps the monsters away.
You amaze me with your art, colours and imagery of romance.
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Oh.Thank you so much for such a beautiful very incredible comment :)...and this poem is simply about loving someone who you've never met or even seen.But just loving him in your imagination which actually hurts in the end to continue loving him,because real love must be felt by heart than imagination.
Thank you very much, your comments are always greatly appreciated :)
Hey Yulia! Ia decided to return the favor and read through your work :)
The poem is beautiful and I tend to see a little more to the story. It seems like that the girl and the boy are in love but also realize the consequences :)
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Thank you o much for reading it and for commenting too.
I really appreciated :)
Thank You!!!
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tue, March 3rd, 2015 9:29pm
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Well,thanks for reading it and commenting.
Thank you :)
It is possible to say that I didn't feel, but saw how are you lying on a grass that is softness itself. You look at the sky between dark clouds and your thoughts run on their own way. It is possible to draw it if I could. Great world around you. Amazing poem!
Sat, March 7th, 2015 8:25pm
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Oh,thank you so much Lee for such a beautiful comment really made my day wonderful!!!
Sun, March 8th, 2015 4:36am
I have a girl of my dreams too. It's actually quite normal. Love this poem!
Sun, June 14th, 2015 12:10am
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Thank you very much for reading this and for such a lovely comment =)...You're comments are always greatly appreciated!
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Wow! Very beautiful. I can relate because I'm very young and have no one that I can spend time with on the beach. Anyways, this is a great poem and tell me when you write more. Best wishes :D
Fri, October 3rd, 2014 12:00amAuthor
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Thank you so much for reading it,your comment is greatly appreciated.Once again thank you I'm glad you liked it..
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