A short poem about how can we love someone or somebody that is not exist or we even don't have feelings of true love toward them.It is also about how we can love the image of person than his\\her personality.I guess the poem should explain itself.

It's a velvet night

With a silver lights

And the world is quite

Like a sleeping child


I'm laying on a sandy beach , counting shiny stars

I can smell blue perfume, coming from the lonely ocean

Am I in love?

Or is it just lying emotion


It may be a secret

But not forever

It may be a curse

But not tonight, because my love is shining bright


We don't need nobody

Cause we got each other

Or at least I pretend him in my head

Because actually he doesn't exist


He is just an idea of softness

He is just an idea of smoothness

He is just an image of happiness

He is nothing, but a velvet touch


It's a velvet spring

With an autumn leaves

And the world is peaceful

Like the deep, dark sea


I'm watching as the clouds passing above of me

I can feel the eastern and western wind in my soul

 But in my mind it is still summer

Still that hot weather


I love lazy nights on sunny shores

I love how we play and fight

We can do it forever

It's just energy


I may still live in my dreams

Like a child afraid of his fears

Or so immature to live

Or even so weak to leave


I created this love and made it alive

To show you how does it feel

To love someone who is not real?

Who is just an image in your dreams


I can dream forever

It's a freedom

But I will die young

Because this love is like a venom


He is just an idea of being in love

He is just an idea of being hurt

He is just an image of pain

He is nothing, but a velvet touch


His soul is brightly colored

His mind is amazingly admired

He is as proud as national anthem


I can dream forever

It's a freedom

But I'll die young

Because this love is like sugar venom


Winter will go

Summer will come again

 Everything will stay the same

And he will stay as a velvet touch on my skin


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your comments are always greatly appreciated"














Submitted: October 02, 2014

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Wow! Very beautiful. I can relate because I'm very young and have no one that I can spend time with on the beach. Anyways, this is a great poem and tell me when you write more. Best wishes :D

Fri, October 3rd, 2014 12:00am


Thank you so much for reading it,your comment is greatly appreciated.Once again thank you I'm glad you liked it..

Thu, October 2nd, 2014 5:33pm

Amy Furzane

Wow! This poem is so honest and deep. I love the line 'To love someone who is not real, who is an image in your dreams' and 'He is just an idea of being in love, he is just and idea of being hurt'. I really really like the message behind this poem and the way you put it in words. Great work, Yuliana! :) -Amy

Fri, October 3rd, 2014 4:43am


Oh,thank you so much for reading it and for commenting,really appreciated.thank you!!!

Fri, October 3rd, 2014 5:27pm


Very nice. I love the idea because sea is very romantic and just staring at it would really make anyone have these thoughts, you've turned into a poem

Mon, October 6th, 2014 11:25pm


Thank you so so much for reading it and for commenting,your comments are always greatly appreciated :)
Thank You!!

Fri, November 28th, 2014 8:24am

Emera Kat

I like it :) it's beautiful. Romantic and a little sad at the same time.. I also like your rhythm that you used :)

Wed, October 8th, 2014 6:56pm


Merci.thank you so much for reading it and for commenting.Your comments are always greatly appreciated...Thank You!!!!

Fri, November 28th, 2014 8:27am

Areen Abukishek

Wow yulia that was really perfect and great that nudge its way through my heart

Sat, October 25th, 2014 2:39pm


Thank you dear for reading it,it really means to me so much.Thank you so much!!!

Fri, November 28th, 2014 8:29am

Aparna Gopan

good work yulia..just adore your works...
your poems are more than poems I could say...
the title itself is so catchy....and thanks a bunch
dear for checking on me...:):):)

Wed, November 5th, 2014 2:59pm


OH,What a beautiful comment you've sent me!...
Thank you so much for reading it and for commenting
Your comments are always greatly appreciated...
Thank You Dear... :)

Fri, November 28th, 2014 8:34am


He is just an idea of being in love....Wow.I loved it...I think,I do feel that 'lying emotion' at times....great work I must say...like!

Thu, February 12th, 2015 3:21pm


Thank you so much,your comment is greatly appreciated.
Thank you so much :)

Thu, February 12th, 2015 7:59am


Nice poem... thoughts are showcased in proper way.I like ur writing style

If u get time then have a look at my new poem


Thu, February 12th, 2015 7:54pm


Thank you for reading it and for commenting,really appreciated.
and sure I'll make sure to check yours when i can...

Thu, February 12th, 2015 12:20pm


People do find comfort in knowing they are in love with something they have never seen, and seeing the image in their head, that imaginery friend becomes a best friend, and a perfect love. They will meet years down the line, growing old together. I find stories like this magical and beautiful, and you write it like it was going through that whole journey.
The emotions are as colourful as the words you write, and you make just the slightest comfort make the heart warm when she thinks of him, and that keeps the monsters away.
You amaze me with your art, colours and imagery of romance.

Sun, February 15th, 2015 11:55pm


Oh.Thank you so much for such a beautiful very incredible comment :)...and this poem is simply about loving someone who you've never met or even seen.But just loving him in your imagination which actually hurts in the end to continue loving him,because real love must be felt by heart than imagination.
Thank you very much, your comments are always greatly appreciated :)

Mon, February 16th, 2015 10:30am


Hey Yulia! Ia decided to return the favor and read through your work :)
The poem is beautiful and I tend to see a little more to the story. It seems like that the girl and the boy are in love but also realize the consequences :)

Sat, February 28th, 2015 11:41pm


Thank you o much for reading it and for commenting too.
I really appreciated :)
Thank You!!!

Sun, March 1st, 2015 5:01am

Jake Franks


Tue, March 3rd, 2015 9:29pm


Well,thanks for reading it and commenting.
Thank you :)

Wed, March 4th, 2015 3:59am


It is possible to say that I didn't feel, but saw how are you lying on a grass that is softness itself. You look at the sky between dark clouds and your thoughts run on their own way. It is possible to draw it if I could. Great world around you. Amazing poem!

Sat, March 7th, 2015 8:25pm


Oh,thank you so much Lee for such a beautiful comment really made my day wonderful!!!

Sun, March 8th, 2015 4:36am


I have a girl of my dreams too. It's actually quite normal. Love this poem!

Sun, June 14th, 2015 12:10am


Thank you very much for reading this and for such a lovely comment =)...You're comments are always greatly appreciated!

Sat, June 13th, 2015 5:46pm

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