Rest your head on my shoulder,
Please close your tired eyes
I'm right here beside you,
Don't you think you're left behind
--
Don't let this pain bring you down love,
For you will be just fine,
Let my healing hands hold you,
Cradling your inner child
--
Don't let go of the hope dear one
Have faith that everything will be alright
And I will always be by your side
Holding your hand, till I die
Submitted: October 17, 2011
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Your poems are simply SO enchanting! I loved this piece, it's very touching! Keep writing! ^^
Take care,
~Ally :)
Awww, this poem is SO cute and touchy!
Very beautifully written! great job brother! :D
loved it! :)
as always, another great poem... how do you do it?
Thanks for the update. :)
This poem is so overwhelming! It's beautiful and passionately well-written that it touched my heart the moment I began the first line! Brilliant!
~Naomi aka Fascinating~ ;)
Lovely...the simple use of words, and the tender articulation of your ideas make the poem worth it!:) Keep writing!
Tue, October 18th, 2011 10:51amvery nice, comforting!! This surely touched my heart, TRULY SPECIAL!
Tue, October 18th, 2011 11:13amTouching! :)
Wed, October 19th, 2011 8:13amGracefully romantic!
Thu, October 20th, 2011 1:08amBeautiful poem...
Thu, October 20th, 2011 10:00amYou are such a glorious change from what it is that I normally read, your poems are sweet and thoughtful, very well written, in fact. I enjoy your work, please keep it up, glorious poem, by the way.
Wed, October 26th, 2011 9:11pmholding ur hands, till i die..very good poem
Tue, November 15th, 2011 3:24pmDude, it is good [by the test stand of moving a woman's heart]. Still, it is poems like this, that causes women to remember that the love-of-marriage; to the point that they get married.
Nicely written.
Extremly romantic, can moved anybody who have loving heart. Brilliant performance as a poet. Lines are smartly balanced, good rhyming, easy flow, very emotive. Good work, keep writting and amazing your readers :) !!!!!!!
Thu, January 19th, 2012 10:35amSo comforting...smooth...Loved it...
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richadixit
what a pleasant thing to read,,lovely it is,,beautiful ....loved reading it,,,,
Mon, October 17th, 2011 2:25pmAuthor
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Thanks rich..:) Glad you liked it...:)
Mon, October 17th, 2011 10:38am