Get Well Soon

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Foe someone who is not keeping well..

Rest your head on my shoulder,

Please close your tired eyes

I'm right here beside you,

Don't you think you're left behind

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Don't let this pain bring you down love,

For you will be just fine,

Let my healing hands hold you,

Cradling your inner child

--

Don't let go of the hope dear one

Have faith that everything will be alright

And I will always be by your side

Holding your hand, till I die

alt


Submitted: October 17, 2011

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richadixit

what a pleasant thing to read,,lovely it is,,beautiful ....loved reading it,,,,

Mon, October 17th, 2011 2:25pm

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Thanks rich..:) Glad you liked it...:)

Mon, October 17th, 2011 10:38am

absolutelyalice

Your poems are simply SO enchanting! I loved this piece, it's very touching! Keep writing! ^^

Take care,
~Ally :)

Mon, October 17th, 2011 5:34pm

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Thanks a lot AllY!! I'm so glad you feel so..! You too take care..:)

Mon, October 17th, 2011 11:28am

Biya

Awww, this poem is SO cute and touchy!
Very beautifully written! great job brother! :D
loved it! :)

Mon, October 17th, 2011 8:18pm

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Hey Thanks Biya!! I'm really glad you liked it...:)

Tue, October 18th, 2011 1:33am

Alisindra

as always, another great poem... how do you do it?
Thanks for the update. :)

Mon, October 17th, 2011 8:56pm

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Thanks Alisandra...:)
I dunno, it just happens... And I'm happy you liked it..:)

Tue, October 18th, 2011 1:34am

Fascinating

This poem is so overwhelming! It's beautiful and passionately well-written that it touched my heart the moment I began the first line! Brilliant!

~Naomi aka Fascinating~ ;)

Tue, October 18th, 2011 6:02am

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Hey Thanks Naomi...:) I'm flattered by your response... :) :)

Tue, October 18th, 2011 1:35am

Nabs

Lovely...the simple use of words, and the tender articulation of your ideas make the poem worth it!:) Keep writing!

Tue, October 18th, 2011 10:51am

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Thanks a lot... I'm glad you feel so...:) :)

Tue, October 18th, 2011 5:37am

glitter snow426

very nice, comforting!! This surely touched my heart, TRULY SPECIAL!

Tue, October 18th, 2011 11:13am

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Thanks Vincey...:) :) I'm glad you liked it...:) :)

Tue, October 18th, 2011 5:37am

Shweta

Touching! :)

Wed, October 19th, 2011 8:13am

Author
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Thanks...!:)

Wed, October 19th, 2011 2:47am

Saaya

Gracefully romantic!

Thu, October 20th, 2011 1:08am

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Thanks...:) :)

Fri, October 21st, 2011 5:40am

ClarinetCandy

Beautiful poem...

Thu, October 20th, 2011 10:00am

Author
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Thanks//:)

Fri, October 21st, 2011 5:39am

Brenna Lynn

You are such a glorious change from what it is that I normally read, your poems are sweet and thoughtful, very well written, in fact. I enjoy your work, please keep it up, glorious poem, by the way.

Wed, October 26th, 2011 9:11pm

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Thanks a lot Brenna...:) I'm really flattered to know that...:) :)

Thu, October 27th, 2011 5:41am

Honeysuckle1310

holding ur hands, till i die..very good poem

Tue, November 15th, 2011 3:24pm

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Thanks Kim..:)

Sat, November 19th, 2011 8:52pm

Holy Ghost

Dude, it is good [by the test stand of moving a woman's heart]. Still, it is poems like this, that causes women to remember that the love-of-marriage; to the point that they get married.
Nicely written.

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 11:11pm

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Hahahaha... I really dunno what to say..! Thanks anyways :)

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 9:28pm

ashi17

Extremly romantic, can moved anybody who have loving heart. Brilliant performance as a poet. Lines are smartly balanced, good rhyming, easy flow, very emotive. Good work, keep writting and amazing your readers :) !!!!!!!

Thu, January 19th, 2012 10:35am

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Thanks A lot!! I'm really pleased to know that you liked it so much..:) Thanks Again!:)

Fri, January 27th, 2012 4:39am

Archana Menon

So comforting...smooth...Loved it...

Fri, July 27th, 2012 10:00am

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