Get Well Soon

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Poem by: Yusufalam

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Foe someone who is not keeping well..

Submitted: October 17, 2011

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Submitted: October 17, 2011

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Rest your head on my shoulder,

Please close your tired eyes

I'm right here beside you,

Don't you think you're left behind

Don't let this pain bring you down love,

For you will be just fine,

Let my healing hands hold you,

Cradling your inner child

Don't let go of the hope dear one

Have faith that everything will be alright

And I will always be by your side

Holding your hand, till I die

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richadixit

Comment | 13 words

Mon, October 17th, 2011 7:25am

what a pleasant thing to read,,lovely it is,,beautiful ....loved reading it,,,,

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Comment | 6 words

Mon, October 17th, 2011 10:38am

Thanks rich..:) Glad you liked it...:)

absolutelyalice

Comment | 18 words

Mon, October 17th, 2011 10:34am

Your poems are simply SO enchanting! I loved this piece, it's very touching! Keep writing! ^^

Take care,
~Ally :)

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Comment | 14 words

Mon, October 17th, 2011 11:28am

Thanks a lot AllY!! I'm so glad you feel so..! You too take care..:)

Biya

Comment | 17 words

Mon, October 17th, 2011 1:18pm

Awww, this poem is SO cute and touchy!
Very beautifully written! great job brother! :D
loved it! :)

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Comment | 9 words

Tue, October 18th, 2011 1:33am

Hey Thanks Biya!! I'm really glad you liked it...:)

Alisindra

Comment | 14 words

Mon, October 17th, 2011 1:56pm

as always, another great poem... how do you do it?
Thanks for the update. :)

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Comment | 13 words

Tue, October 18th, 2011 1:34am

Thanks Alisandra...:)
I dunno, it just happens... And I'm happy you liked it..:)

Fascinating

Comment | 26 words

Mon, October 17th, 2011 11:02pm

This poem is so overwhelming! It's beautiful and passionately well-written that it touched my heart the moment I began the first line! Brilliant!

~Naomi aka Fascinating~ ;)

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Comment | 8 words

Tue, October 18th, 2011 1:35am

Hey Thanks Naomi...:) I'm flattered by your response... :) :)

Nabs

Comment | 20 words

Tue, October 18th, 2011 3:51am

Lovely...the simple use of words, and the tender articulation of your ideas make the poem worth it!:) Keep writing!

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Comment | 8 words

Tue, October 18th, 2011 5:37am

Thanks a lot... I'm glad you feel so...:) :)

glitter snow426

Comment | 10 words

Tue, October 18th, 2011 4:13am

very nice, comforting!! This surely touched my heart, TRULY SPECIAL!

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Comment | 7 words

Tue, October 18th, 2011 5:37am

Thanks Vincey...:) :) I'm glad you liked it...:) :)

Shweta

Comment | 1 words

Wed, October 19th, 2011 1:13am

Touching! :)

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Wed, October 19th, 2011 2:47am

Thanks...!:)

Saaya

Comment | 2 words

Wed, October 19th, 2011 6:08pm

Gracefully romantic!

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Fri, October 21st, 2011 5:40am

Thanks...:) :)

ClarinetCandy

Comment | 2 words

Thu, October 20th, 2011 3:00am

Beautiful poem...

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Comment | 1 words

Fri, October 21st, 2011 5:39am

Thanks//:)

Brenna Lynn

Comment | 38 words

Wed, October 26th, 2011 2:11pm

You are such a glorious change from what it is that I normally read, your poems are sweet and thoughtful, very well written, in fact. I enjoy your work, please keep it up, glorious poem, by the way.

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Comment | 10 words

Thu, October 27th, 2011 5:41am

Thanks a lot Brenna...:) I'm really flattered to know that...:) :)

Honeysuckle1310

Comment | 9 words

Tue, November 15th, 2011 7:24am

holding ur hands, till i die..very good poem

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Sat, November 19th, 2011 8:52pm

Thanks Kim..:)

Holy Ghost

Comment | 36 words

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 3:11pm

Dude, it is good [by the test stand of moving a woman's heart]. Still, it is poems like this, that causes women to remember that the love-of-marriage; to the point that they get married.
Nicely written.

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Comment | 9 words

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 9:28pm

Hahahaha... I really dunno what to say..! Thanks anyways :)

ashi17

Comment | 32 words

Thu, January 19th, 2012 2:35am

Extremly romantic, can moved anybody who have loving heart. Brilliant performance as a poet. Lines are smartly balanced, good rhyming, easy flow, very emotive. Good work, keep writting and amazing your readers :) !!!!!!!

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Comment | 16 words

Fri, January 27th, 2012 4:39am

Thanks A lot!! I'm really pleased to know that you liked it so much..:) Thanks Again!:)