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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a real story of a passionate girl

This is an angel with the face of doll
She is an open book glorifying the hall

Her black eyes glitter in strange beauty
I may gaze at them for hours as my duty

She takes care of her old mother
She has no other work to bother

She has a pain deep inside her heart
Her father left the family to live apart

She dropped herself from school for a sacred mission
To look after her mother as token of love and passion

I adore the girl who really writes wonderful poem
I wish for her a handsome groom and happy home

Submitted: December 25, 2012

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Matthew Zabala

This is a very heart-felt poem. Written for your daughter, or someone close to you no doubt.

You write from the heart, and I can most definitely appreciate that.

Keep it up brother, and welcome to Booksie!

Tue, December 25th, 2012 6:10am


Thank you Matthew for your admiring review.
This is about a girl whose father has gone away leaving
his wife and daughter.
The girl has to look after her old mother.
Please pray for the broken family which is passing through hard time.
Best wishes,

Tue, December 25th, 2012 7:30am

Vasanthi Papu

It was so touching. The misery and pathos of the girl gains our sympathy and prayers. The poem also reveals ur kindness and compassion for our fellow beings. great job. Keep writing.
Comment on my works too.

Tue, December 25th, 2012 8:21am


Thank you Angelin for your inspiring review.
I will comment on your works soon.

Tue, December 25th, 2012 11:59am


Oh, what a beautiful poem. I have known many children who had to leave studies and work just to earn for their families. Very heart touching and sad. Please write more poems soon!

Tue, December 25th, 2012 3:17pm


Thank you Asfi for the wonderful review and commendable inspiration.
I will write more poem for your lovely reading.
Best wishes,

Tue, December 25th, 2012 4:30pm

Matthew Zabala

Will do, Zainul.

Wed, December 26th, 2012 12:31am

Brian Helminen

It's unfortunate and sad that there are so many broken families... all the hurt is causes the mom, the dad,, the kids, friends and the rest of the families. I hope to help families stay together.

Wed, January 2nd, 2013 2:03pm

thumblina Aka vandana

waow this a soo deep

welcome to Booksie

its heart touching...

really loved it and cant wait to read ur next work

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 4:18pm


So tender but so true =/

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 10:11pm

Kathleen Oakwood

Nicely done-well done you. I enjoyed reading this.

So heartfelt and sentimental, and truly Poetic. You are deserving of a commendation.

All the best,

Tue, January 29th, 2013 1:18am


I feel very happy to read your admiring review.
Thanks for your generous words.

Mon, January 28th, 2013 5:39pm


Very touching story, nicely presented. Good work !

Tue, February 26th, 2013 4:09pm

Ina mcfarmers

Very nice poem, you are very talented.

Wed, March 6th, 2013 4:43pm


That's nice Zainul :)

Wed, July 24th, 2013 4:14am


Amaaaaazzzing!. Truly touching

Fri, August 23rd, 2013 4:50pm

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