Poem by: ZaneJayxxxxxx
poetry, soul, dead, rose
Submitted: March 31, 2012
I see the dead rose
Just like the soul
Just sitting there
But just don't touch
Don't make it worst
It won't fix this soul
Don't feel this dead rose
Don't feel this soul
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o.o I likeyy thiss!!!:D Post moreeeeee!!!!!!!!:D
Haha, thanks, Soul! :)
I like this poem its pretty and good!! I will like this!!!
You're good! Even with the short length, I loved it! Keep up the good work! Please tell me if you write any more poems.
P.S. Thanks for reading my work I appreciate it.
Angel Of Life
Good job, I like it.
Short and sweet, niceeeee:)
Cookies for u!!
This.....this is.....this is dark.....and.......awesome.......and.......I like......no.....LOVE.......it...........please post more...... o_O xD
You're too funny, man. xD I'll try to write more, but I don't usually write poems. This was one that just suddenly came to me like a gift. xD But, like I said. I'll try. I'm gonna try to make a special poem for............someone ;3 And I knew you'd like this one. xD You're a dark person :3
O.K.. I won't. But if the soul talks to me from beyond the grave I will talk back! L.O.L.
Robin Jay xx
~Robin Jay xx
So short, and yet it has so much depth of emotion. I loved it! GreatWrite :)
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