Siren Song

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Poem by: Zaphera

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Status: Finished | Genre: Romance | House: Booksie Classic

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Have you ever wished that 'that person' would notice you? Well this is me putting it in writing^-^

Submitted: July 23, 2010

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Submitted: July 23, 2010

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You listen to their siren songs

but do not hear my silent plea

A plea to have you next to me

talking gently

You’ll always go back to them

until you’re fixed to their mast

You always strike your head

against the rocks

of a long forgotten past

but don’t seam to care

You always go back to them

No mater what their scheme

They drain you of your fight

then toss you to the sea

for some one like me

who only wants to talk idly

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Snapdragon123

Comment | 37 words

Sat, July 24th, 2010 1:05am

Firstys! YEEAAA!!
I like this poem a lot! I totally know the feeling of liking a guy who dosn't even know that you exsist and it totally sucks! Very good poem. Your rhythm is good!
-Snap.XD

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Comment | 28 words

Sun, July 25th, 2010 12:38am

Thanx Snap!!! Glad you could comiserate with me, this has happened to me to many times to count so... You are a spectaculer reader and I comend you^.^

Kritika

Comment | 59 words

Sun, July 25th, 2010 2:53am

Loved it!!

=)

And this is exactly the kind of rhyme scheme i use......irregular but still maintains the flow....so i'm bound to like it...;)

LOL!! Just kidding!! =P

But honestly.......i loved the title....siren song....it actually reminds me of a song about siren songs..
"Liar Liar" by "A fine frenzy"

Beautifully put poem! =D

Love

~Kritika

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Comment | 7 words

Mon, July 26th, 2010 5:04am

Thanx sis glad you enjoyed it^-^

Kritika

Comment | 11 words

Sun, July 25th, 2010 2:54am

PS....there are a few typing mistakes but they are ignorable! =)

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Comment | 14 words

Mon, July 26th, 2010 5:05am

I'll check them out when I have a chance thanks for letting me know

Sierra MacKenzie

Comment | 3 words

Mon, July 26th, 2010 12:36pm

Wow. Love it. :)

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Comment | 3 words

Tue, July 27th, 2010 4:46am

Thanks bud^-^

Graeme Montrose

Comment | 41 words

Wed, July 28th, 2010 12:40am

Nice! Love it! Amazing but so true that it seems sometimes we can be under some sirens spell, even know only too well how it will end, like the moth to flame heedlessly we fly the end result? Well everyone knows!

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Comment | 22 words

Wed, July 28th, 2010 4:20am

I think we've all gone through something like this before. Thanks for letting me know what you thought^-^ Much apreciated Graeme