Submitted: July 23, 2010
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Loved it!!
=)
And this is exactly the kind of rhyme scheme i use......irregular but still maintains the flow....so i'm bound to like it...;)
LOL!! Just kidding!! =P
But honestly.......i loved the title....siren song....it actually reminds me of a song about siren songs..
"Liar Liar" by "A fine frenzy"
Beautifully put poem! =D
Love
~Kritika
PS....there are a few typing mistakes but they are ignorable! =)
Sun, July 25th, 2010 9:54amWow. Love it. :)
Mon, July 26th, 2010 7:36pmNice! Love it! Amazing but so true that it seems sometimes we can be under some sirens spell, even know only too well how it will end, like the moth to flame heedlessly we fly the end result? Well everyone knows!
Wed, July 28th, 2010 7:40amI've have had a sort of thing like this. *sigh*
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Firstys! YEEAAA!!
Sat, July 24th, 2010 8:05amI like this poem a lot! I totally know the feeling of liking a guy who dosn't even know that you exsist and it totally sucks! Very good poem. Your rhythm is good!
-Snap.XD
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Thanx Snap!!! Glad you could comiserate with me, this has happened to me to many times to count so... You are a spectaculer reader and I comend you^.^
Sun, July 25th, 2010 12:38am