Siren Song

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Have you ever wished that 'that person' would notice you? Well this is me putting it in writing^-^

You listen to their siren songs
but do not hear my silent plea
A plea to have you next to me
talking gently
 
You’ll always go back to them
until you’re fixed to their mast
You always strike your head
against the rocks
of a long forgotten past
but don’t seam to care
 
You always go back to them
No mater what their scheme
They drain you of your fight
then toss you to the sea
for some one like me
who only wants to talk idly


Submitted: July 23, 2010

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Snapdragon123

Firstys! YEEAAA!!
I like this poem a lot! I totally know the feeling of liking a guy who dosn't even know that you exsist and it totally sucks! Very good poem. Your rhythm is good!
-Snap.XD

Sat, July 24th, 2010 8:05am

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Thanx Snap!!! Glad you could comiserate with me, this has happened to me to many times to count so... You are a spectaculer reader and I comend you^.^

Sun, July 25th, 2010 12:38am

Kritika

Loved it!!

=)

And this is exactly the kind of rhyme scheme i use......irregular but still maintains the flow....so i'm bound to like it...;)

LOL!! Just kidding!! =P


But honestly.......i loved the title....siren song....it actually reminds me of a song about siren songs..
"Liar Liar" by "A fine frenzy"

Beautifully put poem! =D

Love

~Kritika

Sun, July 25th, 2010 9:53am

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Thanx sis glad you enjoyed it^-^

Mon, July 26th, 2010 5:04am

Kritika

PS....there are a few typing mistakes but they are ignorable! =)

Sun, July 25th, 2010 9:54am

Author
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I'll check them out when I have a chance thanks for letting me know

Mon, July 26th, 2010 5:05am

Sierra MacKenzie

Wow. Love it. :)

Mon, July 26th, 2010 7:36pm

Author
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Thanks bud^-^

Tue, July 27th, 2010 4:46am

Graeme Montrose

Nice! Love it! Amazing but so true that it seems sometimes we can be under some sirens spell, even know only too well how it will end, like the moth to flame heedlessly we fly the end result? Well everyone knows!

Wed, July 28th, 2010 7:40am

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I think we've all gone through something like this before. Thanks for letting me know what you thought^-^ Much apreciated Graeme

Wed, July 28th, 2010 4:20am

Fantasy writer

I've have had a sort of thing like this. *sigh*

Thu, September 23rd, 2010 7:02pm

Author
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So have I, many times, sorry to hear you have too but happy that you can relate^.^ Thanks for reading

Thu, September 23rd, 2010 8:39pm

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