Blood roses

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

,.,.

Rose petals stained with blood,

fall onto our graves,

We're dead to you

not one of us to save.

A broken light

and a shaded day.

not one of our souls,

could ever have been saved.


Submitted: April 25, 2012

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sweet agony xo

ohmygosh hun, this is absoulutely spectacular, your so amazingly talented. and skilled...... in bed c; haha jokes.

anyways great work.

Thu, April 26th, 2012 12:05am

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thanks, in the rain c:

Wed, April 25th, 2012 5:08pm

Brian W

Short but good...Well written

Tue, May 8th, 2012 11:32pm

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thank you

Wed, May 9th, 2012 4:23pm

amidoncullison

You seem to have a talent for painting emotions with the brush stroke of a lightening strike! Extreme to the core, but.....honest, not at all pretentious. Have you tried your hand at song lyrics? You should try setting this to music. Again, well done.

Tue, July 3rd, 2012 3:54am

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thanks :)

Tue, July 3rd, 2012 4:04pm

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