Poem by: zelda Xx
Submitted: March 18, 2012
the shapes of lovers past.
they cast no shadow
onto your hollow cheek bones.
that half of your pain,
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good job using simplicity. seriously, i think it sounds more deep. like your goal is to "pretend" to veil the sadness by being simple, knowing full well that it would make it all the more meaningful. its good.
thanks, that means a lot :)
very strong and meaningful, i liked it
like Ebony Alexis said, this is very strong and meaningful. You placed your words so elegantly that it really made the poem pop. Also like Lexie M said you used simplicity. I feel that really did make it better, too many people now days try to go to deep into it and they loose the sight of what really needs to be said.
thanks so much
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