Awesome Contest Results

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

The results are in. Did you win?

Thanks to all those who participated in my first ever contest! Here are the results:

What You Were Judged On:

But first let me tell you quickly what you were judged on. You were judged on:

C Comments- So I can know if I missed anything like why the story was bad or inaccurate or good.
Detail- A big part of the story. Detail gives you imagery causing the reader to kind of feel the story.

Sticking to your Genre- This should be an easy A. YOU CHOSE THE GENRE! All you have to do is stick to it at least in one paragraph or chapter in the story.

Grammar- I was also judging grammar but a lot of people had excellent stories but too many mistakes so I did you a favor, and turned the other cheek.

So without further delay, here are the results:

First Place Goes To marchbaby316 for her entry Finally Gone.

Finally Gone-A boy is sick of living his life. You see his parent's died 7 years ago and he had to live with his grandparents, they made his life miserable. His grandparents only accepted him to make themselves look good. So after years of suffering he was finally gone. The story was just awesome and well detailed.

Second Place Goes To Drizz for his entry The School Shooting

The School Shooting- As most of you read it was action packed and very detailed. It was basically about a school shooting and what would happen if someone fought back. My heart was beating fast when that story was over.

Third Place Goes To Dusk Dawn for his entry Labor of Love

Labor of Love- Tolen Storm and his stunning blue eyes always captured to hearts of those around him. Growing up he learned quick how to be kind to people. To be charming. He literally was the Prince Charming in real life. When it came to the time where he could go off to college or not, he chose a different path. One that would lead him toward death and love. But none of that matter for he had no idea--but if he did know--he would've accepted his fate the way it was. Tolen chose not to go to college because of his family's needs. In his eyes, everybody came first before him even if he had to die to save them. The same went for everybody else. He cared so much about people. He was so selfless that he would die to protect those he loved and those he hated...

And Last But Not Least: Fourth Place Goes To Two People. Yeah Two People!

XxXL4UR3NXx for her entry I Guess I was the only one In Love

I Guess I Was The Only One In Love- A girl has loved her best friend for like forever but when he does not return it, could it put a damper on their friendship.

crimsondawn for her entry Surrounded by Music In a World of Hate

Surrounded by Music in a World of Hate- The title alone makes you wanna read it. At a new school, Hayley doesn't fit in. The only people who even like her are Josh, a flaming boy who is makes her laugh and is a good friend, Nat (Natasha) who is more like hayley than anyone, and Jamie, a mysterious hottie that she's seen before. on the same night jamie and hayley fall for eachother, something terrible happens. can music, the thing that has saved both hayley and jamie's lives countless times before, help them rise above the pain? or is the pain and the obsession destroy everyone? Read it and find out!

Thanx to all who joined and just because you didn't win doesn't mean you are not a winner. Check out the stories and don't forget to sign up for

Awesome Contest 2


Submitted: July 28, 2009

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ZeroG57

Awesome Contest 2 Is now up and accepting

Tue, July 28th, 2009 7:46pm

ZeroG57

I don't know what is wrong with the system. It's supposed to say comments detail sticking to ur genre.

Tue, July 28th, 2009 7:53pm

Drizz

sweet i got 2end place!!!! =)

Tue, July 28th, 2009 7:59pm

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and u deserved it :)

Wed, July 29th, 2009 1:49pm

marchbaby316

omg rly??????????????? i got first????? i my first freakin contest???? ohmigod!

Wed, July 29th, 2009 9:11pm

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then u definately have a future in writing

Wed, July 29th, 2009 2:15pm

marchbaby316

and congrats to everyone else too =D

Wed, July 29th, 2009 9:12pm

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XD

Wed, July 29th, 2009 2:15pm

Dusk Dawn

aaw thanks. Third Place. :) That made my day. And good job everybody else!!

Wed, July 29th, 2009 9:55pm

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i loved ur story but like mostly every1 had good stories

Wed, July 29th, 2009 4:49pm

crimsondawn

yay i got placed haha. thanks:D

Thu, July 30th, 2009 2:29am

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no prob

Wed, July 29th, 2009 7:56pm

Drizz

sweet marchbaby316 this was my 1st contest as well the 2 noobs got 1st and 2nd =)

Thu, July 30th, 2009 11:47am

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wow r u serious. this was my first contest to make

Fri, July 31st, 2009 9:36am

marchbaby316

lol we shuld b so proud of ourselves =D

Fri, July 31st, 2009 1:41pm

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:)

Fri, July 31st, 2009 9:37am

XxXL4UR3NXx

YaY I got a place lol
Congrats to everyone :)

Tue, August 4th, 2009 7:49pm

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i was wondering where you were. don't forget to enter awesome contest two

Tue, August 4th, 2009 1:02pm

connieemo1

wellz donz! LOL i think they do deserve it ive read all of XxXL4UR3NXx sorys :D you dont no how bad at typing in capitals i am LOL

Wed, August 26th, 2009 5:20pm

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lol i think u are definately my new booksie friend

Wed, August 26th, 2009 12:00pm

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