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Obscurity

Poem by: ziggom

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A poem I wrote today...it's very short, still not sure if I like it or not, may eventually expand it to a song, but haven't decided. Let me know what you think.

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Submitted: September 14, 2013

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Submitted: September 14, 2013

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Watching this world that’s surrounding me
Hope filled eyes troubled by obscurity
But persistence consumes my longevity
To keep pushing on for the best of me
Until all I see, through this insanity
Is either my fulfilled fantasy or the death of me

 


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Genre: Poetry

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A poem I wrote today...it's very short, still not sure if I like it or not, may eventually expand it to a song, but haven't decided. Let me know what you think.

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