Fear of...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

random writing

Help me solve my fear,
My fear of wonder,
My fear of myself,
My fear of …
Solving the mystery of …
Family and friends are so…
Questionable?
Why are things so randomly placed in our lives?
Are those things really placed at random?
Have you ever seen someone watching you?
In fear have you ran away from something or someone that startled you?
Is your fear my fear?
Is your fear…
FEAR…


Submitted: August 27, 2010

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Naminesfriend

I love the part "Solving the mystery of. . . family and frinds are so. . . Questionable? why are things so randomly placed in our lives?" That was a perfect example of random that can be shown in everyday conversation. Very good work.

Fri, August 27th, 2010 8:28pm

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thank you very much for a 1st attempt to get 2 comments within about 10 minutes means a ton for me especially for my 1st piece thank you

Fri, August 27th, 2010 5:50pm

loveliteracy

I like this poem! It's a very good read, though I think the best part was "Is your fear my fear?/Is your fear.../FEAR..." That was a nice way to end it, I think. :) Good work!

Fri, August 27th, 2010 8:31pm

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thank you it was my 1st 1 so i appreciate it very much i have posted 3 other ones i think you might like all different kinds of writing

Fri, August 27th, 2010 5:49pm

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